记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“I'm not very good at me in things”应为“I'm not very good at memorising things”。建议注意句子结构，避免语法错误，同时回答应更简洁自然。

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I usually have to repeat information several times to remember it.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和断句不连贯的问题，如“or an hour before”应为“an hour before”，以及“have to bought”应为“had to buy”。建议练习连贯表达，注意时态和句子完整性。

範例: Yes, once I arrived at the train station an hour before my train was due to leave, but I forgot to bring my charger. I had to buy a new one at the shop.

建議: 回答基本清晰，但句子中断较多，如“set a clock for it”应为“set an alarm”。建议注意句子完整性和用词准确性，使表达更自然。

範例: I need to feed my kittens every day before I go to work. To remember this, I set an alarm on my phone.

建議: 回答中断句不连贯，时态使用不当，如“Next day. I was sent a reminder”应为“the next day, I receive a reminder”。建议练习连贯表达和正确时态使用。

範例: When I need to remember important things, I make a detailed list on my phone and set alarms. For example, if I have a meeting the next day, I receive a reminder.

× Oh no, I'm not very good at me in things.

✓ Oh no, I'm not very good at memorising things.

这里错误地使用了代词“me”，正确的表达应该是“good at memorising things”，即“擅长记忆事情”。“me”在这里不合适，应该使用动名词短语。

× I have to bought one.

✓ I had to buy one.

这里使用了错误的过去时态形式“have to bought”，正确的表达应该是“had to buy”，因为“have to”表示必须，过去时态应为“had to”，后面接动词原形“buy”。

× I was so sorry that I forgot to take.

✓ I was so sorry that I forgot to take it.

句子缺少宾语，动词“take”后应有宾语“it”，表示忘记带某物。

× In the. Shop.

✓ in the shop.

句子中“in the. Shop.”断句错误，应连写为“in the shop”，表示在商店里。

× I need to feed my kittens every day before I go to work. To keep that in mind, I. Set a clock for it.

✓ I need to feed my kittens every day before I go to work. To keep that in mind, I set a clock for it.

句子中“set a clock for it”表达正确，但句子断句错误，应连贯写作。

× When I have to remember important things, I make a detailed list of them on my phone and set. An alarm for them as a reminder.

✓ When I have to remember important things, I make a detailed list of them on my phone and set an alarm for them as a reminder.

句子中“set. An alarm”断句错误，应连写为“set an alarm”，表示设置闹钟提醒。

× For example, if I have to attend a meeting. Next day. I was sent a reminder for it.

✓ For example, if I have to attend a meeting the next day, I am sent a reminder for it.

这里时态不一致，描述的是将来事件，应使用一般现在时或将来时，“I was sent”是过去时，不符合语境。

× For example, if I have to attend a meeting. Next day.

✓ For example, if I have to attend a meeting the next day.

“Next day”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指第二天。