记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然流畅，句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并且直接回答问题后用具体细节支持。

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I have a part-time job and take care of my children. Therefore, I often rely on my phone or a shopping list to remember important items and appointments.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子不连贯。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达清楚事件经过，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, once I forgot my passport when I traveled for business. Luckily, my husband took it to the airport for me, even though he had to look after our two sleepy children at the same time. It was an unforgettable experience.

建議: 回答语法和表达混乱，信息不完整。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持，注意语法和词汇的准确性。

範例: As a mother with a part-time job, I need to remember to prepare healthy lunch boxes and dinners for my children. I also have to plan my household chores for the day.

建議: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达不清，句子不连贯。建议使用简单明了的句子，正确使用时态和词汇，并且逻辑清晰。

範例: Every night before I go to sleep, I use my cell phone to make a list of important tasks for the next day. In the morning, I am usually in a rush because I need to prepare lunch boxes, so I really depend on this method.

× No, I'm not good at memorizing things as a mother who has a part time job and always need the Lister or my cellphone to remember the important item I need to buy into the schedule I need to run.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things as a mother who has a part time job and always needs the list or my cellphone to remember the important items I need to buy and the schedule I need to follow.

主语是单数第三人称（mother），谓语动词需要加-s，'need'应改为'needs'。'Lister'应为'list'，'item'应为复数'items'，因为指多个重要的东西。'buy into the schedule I need to run'表达不清，改为'and the schedule I need to follow'更符合语境。

× Yes, once I had traveled for business, I forgot my passport.

✓ Yes, once I traveled for business, I forgot my passport.

过去完成时(had traveled)在这里不合适，因为句子中没有另一个过去时间点需要对比，简单过去时(traveled)更合适。

× Fortunately, my husband grow to love my passport to the airport for me even though he had to to take care of our 2 sleepy kids at the same time.

✓ Fortunately, my husband drove my passport to the airport for me even though he had to take care of our two sleepy kids at the same time.

动词时态错误，'grow'应为过去式'drove'。'my passport'应为'me'，因为人是被送到机场的对象。数字'2'应写为'two'。多余的'to'应删除。

× It was an unforgettable it.

✓ It was unforgettable.

句子中多余的'it'应删除，'unforgettable'作为形容词修饰前面的'it'即可。

× Is it mother with the lack of part time job I need to remember what to prepare for my kids lunch boxes and dinner so they can have a healthy meals and I also need to schedule my household today D.

✓ As a mother with a part-time job, I need to remember what to prepare for my kids' lunch boxes and dinner so they can have healthy meals, and I also need to schedule my household chores today.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和连贯性。'Is it mother with the lack of part time job'不通顺，改为'As a mother with a part-time job'。'kids lunch boxes'应为'kids' lunch boxes'表示所有格。'a healthy meals'中'a'与复数'meals'不匹配，去掉'a'。'schedule my household today D'不明确，改为'schedule my household chores today'。

× Every night before I sleep I used my cell phone to this the the important items that I need to finish it the next day and in the morning I'm always in a rush because I need to prepare the lunch box.

✓ Every night before I sleep, I use my cell phone to list the important items that I need to finish the next day, and in the morning I'm always in a rush because I need to prepare the lunch box.

时态错误，'used'应为现在时'use'，因为是习惯动作。'to this the the important items'表达错误，应为'to list the important items'。多余的'it'应删除。

× So I really depends on the this time made.

✓ So I really depend on this timetable.

主语是第一人称单数，谓语动词应为'depend'，不是'depends'。'the this time made'表达不清，改为'this timetable'更合适。