记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，例如“have the habit to your son knows”这部分不通顺。建议你在回答时注意语法的正确性，并且尽量简洁明了地表达自己的意思。可以多使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: No, I am not good at memorising things. I often forget where I put my important items. Therefore, I usually write down their locations or use apps to help me remember.

建議: 你的回答不完整，最后一句话没有说完，影响了表达的完整性。建议你在回答时注意句子的完整性，并且使用连接词使内容更连贯，同时避免语法错误。

範例: Yes, I once forgot an important exam when I was in primary school. I stayed up late the night before and didn't get enough sleep, so I overslept the next morning and missed the test. It was a very regrettable experience.

建議: 你的回答中有一些语句不连贯，如“Free.”这部分无意义。建议你在回答时注意句子的连贯性和逻辑性，避免无关词汇的出现，并且使用连接词使内容更流畅。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember many important things because I have many classes, examinations, and assignments. For example, I must attend every class and meet the deadlines for submitting my assignments.

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“will told”应为“will tell”。建议你注意动词时态和形式的正确使用，同时可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I usually take notes in my books and sometimes use apps to help me remember important things. Also, I tell my friends about important matters so they can remind me if needed.

× I often forgot where I put my important things.

✓ I often forget where I put my important things.

这里使用了过去时态forgot，但句子表达的是经常发生的习惯动作，应该用一般现在时forget。

× Uh, so I usually have the habit to your son knows to write down where I put my things and I sometimes use our apps to help me to remember this.

✓ Uh, so I usually have the habit of writing down where I put my things and I sometimes use apps to help me remember this.

句中'have the habit to your son knows to write down'结构不正确，应使用'have the habit of doing'结构，且原句中出现了无关词'your son knows'，应删除。

× Yes, I once got to take an important exam when I was in primary school.

✓ Yes, I once had to take an important exam when I was in primary school.

短语'got to take'不符合正式表达，正确表达是'had to take'表示必须做某事。

× The night before the exam I stayed here very late and didn't get enough sleep so I over slept in the next morning and I missed the test.

✓ The night before the exam I stayed up very late and didn't get enough sleep so I overslept the next morning and missed the test.

'stayed here very late'应为'stayed up very late'表示熬夜；'over slept'应写作一个词'overslept'；'in the next morning'应为'the next morning'。

× It was a.

✓ It was a big mistake.

句子不完整，缺少谓语或补充说明，需补充完整表达。

× And assignments to manage for example.

✓ And assignments to manage, for example.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，且逗号位置错误，应调整使句子完整。

× Free.

单独的单词无法构成句子，需补充完整内容。

× I usually take some notes on my books and sometimes I use some apps to help me remember important things and sometimes I will told important things to my friend so they can remember this for me.

✓ I usually take some notes in my books, sometimes I use some apps to help me remember important things, and sometimes I tell important things to my friends so they can remember them for me.

句子中'will told'时态错误，应为'tell'；'on my books'应为'in my books'；句子连接词使用不当，需用逗号和连词分隔。