记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，导致意思难以理解。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

範例: No, I am not very good at memorising things. For example, when I prepared for the postgraduate entrance exam, I had to remember a lot of information, but I often forgot and had to review it again.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和句型，逻辑更清晰。

範例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I usually set reminders on my phone or write notes to help me remember.

建議: 回答内容较为简单，句子结构单一。建议丰富细节，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like assignment deadlines, class schedules, and appointments with friends.

建議: 表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议简洁明了地描述方法，注意语法和词汇准确性。

範例: I remember important things in two ways. First, I set alarms on my phone as reminders. Second, I write important notes on paper to help me remember.

× No, I think I'm now so.

✓ No, I think I'm not.

这里的表达想要否定当前状态，应该用“I'm not”而不是“I'm now so”。“now”是时间副词，不适合用在这里。

× Excel add memory seems because uhm why was prepared for the post graduate entrance exam and I want I have to receive many things and I.

✓ My memory is not good because I was preparing for the postgraduate entrance exam and I had to remember many things.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，且表达不清晰。需要调整句子结构，使其符合英语语法规范。

× Realize that I forgot allowed and I have to repeat.

✓ I realized that I forgot a lot and I had to repeat.

“Realize”应使用过去式“realized”，因为描述的是过去的事情。“allowed”应为“a lot”，且“have to”应改为过去式“had to”。

× No, I don't forgot something important because if this, uh, things are essential for me, I will set a reminder in my phone or read it on the book or just to remember in my mind so I don't forget something important by something else, maybe I will.

✓ No, I don't forget something important because if these things are essential for me, I will set a reminder on my phone or read it in the book or just remember it in my mind, so I don't forget something important. Maybe I will forget something else.

“don't forgot”应为“don't forget”，动词形式错误。复数名词“things”前应使用“these”而非“this”。介词“on the book”应为“in the book”。句子过长，需分开表达。

× For example, I have to remember 1 is the text deadline or when I have to go to have a lesson or have a date with my friend.

✓ For example, I have to remember one is the test deadline or when I have to go to a lesson or have a date with my friend.

“text”应为“test”，拼写错误。数字“1”应写为“one”。“have a lesson”前应加冠词“a”。

× I have two ways to remember essential scenes on.

✓ I have two ways to remember essential things.

“scenes on”用法错误，应为“things”表示“重要的事情”。

× First one is you can set a alarm in the phone that's a remember reminder when it time out take him.

✓ The first one is you can set an alarm on the phone; that's a reminder when the time is up.

“a alarm”应为“an alarm”，因为alarm以元音音素开头。介词“in the phone”应为“on the phone”。“remember reminder”重复，应简化为“reminder”。

× Poop out and remember.

✓ It pops up and reminds me.

“Poop out”拼写错误，应为“pop up”。句子缺主语和谓语，需补充完整。

× And the remind me second is note down something important on paper.

✓ And the second way to remind me is to note down something important on paper.

“And the remind me second”结构错误，应调整为“the second way to remind me”。