记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了记忆能力，但语法和表达不够准确，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免语法错误，同时使句子更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, if someone tells me 10 items, I can remember them all by imagining each item as a picture, which helps me a lot.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的句型表达否定，并且说明具体做法时要用连贯的句子。

範例: No, I haven't forgotten anything important. If something is less important, I usually take notes and put them on the wall to remind myself.

建議: 回答内容混乱且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议理清思路，使用简单明了的句子描述日常需要记住的事项。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things related to my job, such as calculating accounts, managing orders, keeping track of companies, good contacts, and customers.

建議: 回答较为简洁，但表达不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意冠词和复数形式的正确使用。

範例: I usually write key notes and highlight the important points. At the end of the day, I check the entire list to make sure I haven't missed anything.

× If someone tell me 10 items I can memorize all of land because I image the items into the picture is helping a lot.

✓ If someone tells me 10 items I can memorize all of them because I imagine the items into pictures which helps a lot.

动词tell的主语是第三人称单数someone，动词应加-s变为tells。动词image用错，应为imagine。句中all of land不合适，应为all of them。句子结构不清晰，调整为which helps a lot更通顺。

× If someone tell me 10 items I can memorize all of land because I image the items into the picture is helping a lot.

✓ If someone tells me 10 items I can memorize all of them because I imagine the items into pictures which helps a lot.

items是复数，后面应使用复数形式pictures而非单数picture。

× If less things is important I will take the notes and put them on the wall.

✓ If fewer things are important I will take notes and put them on the wall.

less用于不可数名词，things是可数名词，应使用fewer。句中is应改为are以符合复数主语。notes前不需要冠词the。

× If less things is important I will take the notes and put them on the wall.

✓ If fewer things are important I will take notes and put them on the wall.

things是复数，动词应使用复数形式are。

× Because of my job I have multiple of works to need to do like calculate account, older, which companies, good contacts, customers and a lot of stuff.

✓ Because of my job I have multiple tasks to do like calculating accounts, orders, which companies, good contacts, customers and a lot of stuff.

work是不可数名词，复数形式应为tasks或works。calculate account应改为calculating accounts，older应为orders。

× Because of my job I have multiple of works to need to do like calculate account, older, which companies, good contacts, customers and a lot of stuff.

✓ Because of my job I have multiple tasks to do like calculating accounts, orders, which companies, good contacts, customers and a lot of stuff.

动词后接动名词形式calculating更符合表达习惯。

× I will use the key notes and highlight them. At the end of the day I will check all the list.

✓ I use key notes and highlight them. At the end of the day I check the whole list.

描述习惯动作时应使用一般现在时。key notes前不需要冠词the。all the list应改为the whole list。