记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は直接質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、具体的な例を明確に述べることが重要です。

範例: Yes, I consider myself good at memorizing things. For instance, while my friend often forgets appointments, I usually remember them without any trouble.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で文法的にも誤りが多いです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や方法を具体的に説明する練習が必要です。

範例: I have never forgotten anything important because I always make a list to keep track of my tasks, which helps me remember everything.

建議: 内容が曖昧で文法的な誤りもあります。具体的に何を覚える必要があるのかを明確にし、理由を簡潔に述べることが大切です。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember important dates such as my days off, my friends' birthdays, and public holidays because these occasions matter a lot to me.

建議: 回答は基本的な内容を伝えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。理由を述べる際に接続詞を使い、より流暢に話す練習が必要です。

範例: I usually make a list to remember important things because if I don't, it's easy to forget everything. Therefore, I save my important tasks on my phone.

× my friend already forgot something, but I usually remember that things

✓ my friend already forgot something, but I usually remember those things

The word 'things' is plural, so the demonstrative pronoun should be 'those' instead of 'that'. 'That' is used for singular nouns, while 'those' is used for plural nouns.

× Big 'cause I cannot remember

✓ Because I cannot remember

'Big 'cause' is an incorrect and informal way to say 'because'. The correct conjunction to express reason is 'because'.

× No, I cannot record the the kind of memory

✓ No, I cannot recall that kind of memory

The verb 'record' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is to 'recall' or 'remember'. Also, 'the the' is a repetition error. 'That kind of memory' is the correct phrase.

× Wall my friends, birthday or public holiday

✓ All my friends' birthdays or public holidays

'Wall' is a mispronunciation or typo of 'all'. Also, 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to match 'friends', and possessive form 'friends'' is needed to indicate birthdays belonging to friends.

× So I put in my current

✓ So I put it in my calendar

The phrase 'put in my current' is incomplete and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'put it in my calendar' or 'put it in my schedule' to remember important dates.

× If I don't like a list

✓ If I don't have a list

The phrase 'don't like a list' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is 'don't have a list' to indicate the absence of a list.