记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Votre réponse manque de clarté et de structure. Essayez de formuler une phrase principale claire, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques en utilisant des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus fluide et naturel. Par exemple, évitez les répétitions et les erreurs grammaticales comme "a good memories" et "learn by hurt".

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I have many vivid memories from my childhood. Moreover, I often learn from my mistakes, which helps me remember lessons better. Therefore, I rarely forget important information, which reflects in my good academic results.

建議: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais contient des erreurs grammaticales et manque de fluidité. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour connecter vos idées et évitez les phrases incomplètes. Par exemple, corrigez "I've have" en "I've" et "come right in my things" en une expression plus naturelle.

範例: No, I don't think I have ever forgotten anything important because I usually write everything down in my planner. Also, as I mentioned earlier, I have a good memory, so I always know what to do and complete my tasks on time.

建議: Votre réponse est un peu confuse et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques en utilisant des mots de liaison. Par exemple, corrigez "I usually forgot it" en "I usually forget them" et utilisez des expressions plus naturelles.

範例: I don't need to remember many things because I write all my tasks in my planner. However, I try to maintain some habits like staying hydrated and exercising every day because they are good for my health, although I often forget to do them.

建議: Votre réponse manque de fluidité et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Utilisez des phrases complètes et des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus cohérent. Par exemple, corrigez "Are usually make a list" en "I usually make a list" et "I usually prepared" en "I usually prepare".

範例: I usually make a list to ensure I don't forget important things. Moreover, important matters always stay in my mind, so I prepare carefully for such events. Therefore, I don't think I will forget them.

× Yes, I'm pretty sure that I have a good memories because I have a lot of memories.

✓ Yes, I'm pretty sure that I have good memories because I have a lot of memories.

The word 'memories' is plural, so the article 'a' should not be used before it. 'A' is used with singular countable nouns. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× I often enjoy the learn by hurt.

✓ I often enjoy learning by heart.

The phrase 'learn by hurt' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'learn by heart', meaning to memorize. Also, 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund ('learning').

× I don't usually forget the things. Of my lessons.

✓ I don't usually forget the things of my lessons.

The sentence is fragmented. Combining the two parts into one sentence improves clarity. 'The things of my lessons' is acceptable, but could be better phrased as 'the things from my lessons'.

× So that's why my results, it's good.

✓ So that's why my results are good.

The original sentence has a comma splice and an unnecessary pronoun 'it'. The subject 'results' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. Removing 'it's' and using 'are' corrects the sentence.

× No, I don't think that I've have forgotten something important because I usually.

✓ No, I don't think that I've forgotten something important because I usually...

The phrase 'I've have' is incorrect; it should be 'I've' (I have). Also, the sentence is incomplete after 'usually', which affects clarity.

× Come right in my things on my planner and also as I said earlier I have a good memories so I always know what to do an complete my task.

✓ I write my things in my planner, and also, as I said earlier, I have good memories, so I always know what to do and complete my tasks.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'Come right in my things' is unclear and likely meant 'write my things'. 'A good memories' should be 'good memories' (plural). 'An complete' should be 'and complete'. Adding commas improves readability.

× I have my planners. To write down all my task to complete but there are some habits that I want to keep like stay hydrated or do exercise everyday because it's good for my health but I usually forgot it.

✓ I have my planner to write down all my tasks to complete, but there are some habits that I want to keep like staying hydrated or doing exercise every day because it's good for my health, but I usually forget them.

'Planners' should be singular if referring to one planner. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks'. 'Stay hydrated' and 'do exercise' should be gerunds 'staying hydrated' and 'doing exercise' after 'like'. 'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb). 'Forgot' should be present tense 'forget' to match 'usually'. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural habits.

× Are usually make a list to ensure that I don't forget important things, but I think.

✓ I usually make a list to ensure that I don't forget important things, but I think...

'Are usually make' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually make'. The sentence is incomplete after 'but I think'.

× Important things, always. Exist in my mind so.

✓ Important things always exist in my mind, so...

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. Combining into one sentence with proper word order improves clarity.

× I usually prepared so carefully for that event, so I don't think I will forget it.

✓ I usually prepare so carefully for that event, so I don't think I will forget it.

'Usually' indicates habitual action, which requires present tense 'prepare' instead of past tense 'prepared'.