记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to form complete sentences and directly answer the question. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then provide specific supporting details.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I can easily remember people's names and faces when I meet them for the first time.

建議: Your response is repetitive and lacks fluency. Try to answer directly and provide specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: No, I rarely forget important things because I always remember the dates of birth and mobile numbers of my family and friends.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and fragmented. Try to organise your ideas logically and use linking words to connect them. Provide specific examples of what you need to remember daily.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as what to cook for my family, to call my brother, and to prepare lunch and dinner.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Try to answer directly and explain your method clearly using linking words. Avoid unnecessary words and be specific.

範例: I usually remember important things naturally, but if I am unsure, I write them down in my notebook or save them on my mobile phone.

× I'm very good to memorizing, remembering the.

✓ I'm very good at memorizing and remembering.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at' followed by the gerund form of the verb. Hence, 'good to memorizing' is incorrect; it should be 'good at memorizing'. Also, 'and' is needed to connect the two gerunds properly.

× Teams the cause.

✓ The teams, of course.

The original phrase is incomplete and unclear. It seems the student intended to say 'The teams, of course.' which is a complete phrase and makes sense in context.

× I remember the face of exactly face.

✓ I remember the exact face.

The phrase 'the face of exactly face' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'the exact face' to express precise memory.

× Off person when I meet loss.

✓ Of a person when I meet them.

The phrase 'Off person when I meet loss' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It should be 'of a person when I meet them' to correctly express the idea of remembering someone's face upon meeting.

× I don't forget. Anything.

✓ I don't forget anything.

The sentence is fragmented with unnecessary periods. It should be a single sentence without a period between 'forget' and 'anything'.

× Anything because I always remember date of birth is.

✓ Anything because I always remember dates of birth.

The phrase 'date of birth is' is incorrect here. It should be plural 'dates of birth' to refer generally, and the sentence should be restructured for clarity.

× Anne mobile numbers of our family and friends and I've always remember the person when I meet.

✓ And mobile numbers of our family and friends, and I always remember the person when I meet them.

The sentence has spelling errors ('Anne' should be 'And'), and 'I've always remember' is incorrect; it should be 'I always remember'. Also, 'meet' should be followed by 'them' for clarity.

× In our life. I think most things.

✓ In our life, I think most things.

The sentence is fragmented. It should be combined into one sentence with a comma for proper structure.

× To remember in my daily life like a how.

✓ To remember in my daily life, like how.

The phrase 'like a how' is incorrect. It should be 'like how' without the article 'a'.

× What I do to cook for my family to call my brother.

✓ What I do to cook for my family and to call my brother.

The sentence lacks conjunction 'and' to connect the two actions properly.

× And you make a break for us lunch.

✓ And you make a break for our lunch.

The phrase 'for us lunch' is incorrect. It should be 'for our lunch' to indicate possession.

× And prepare dinner for my family.

✓ And prepare dinner for my family.

This sentence is correct but incomplete as a standalone sentence; however, it fits as part of the previous sentence when connected properly.

× Most of things I always remember.

✓ I always remember most things.

The original sentence has incorrect word order. The subject 'I' should come before the verb 'always remember' and the object 'most things' should follow.

× But when I doubt I forget these things, then it's important for me.

✓ But when I doubt, I forget these things; then it's important for me.

The sentence needs commas and a semicolon for clarity and correct punctuation.

× Then I was right. Written in my notebook and.

✓ Then I write it down in my notebook and

The phrase 'I was right. Written in my notebook' is incorrect. The intended meaning is present tense action, so 'I write it down' is correct. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs continuation.

× In Enders also saving my mobile. You know.

✓ In my phone's reminders, I also save it. You know.

The phrase 'In Enders' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation of 'reminders'. The sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.