记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，表达不自然且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和无意义的词汇。

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget what I just saw or heard.

建議: 回答结构混乱，语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，并说明具体方法或例子。

範例: I have never forgotten something important because I always write important things in my notebook and check them regularly.

建議: 表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单句子清楚表达需要记住的内容。

範例: I need to remember the class schedule because the times change every day, so I check them to make sure I don't miss any classes.

建議: 回答重复且不连贯，语法错误明显。建议简洁说明记忆方法并举例。

範例: I write important things in my notebook and check it regularly. For example, if I have a task for the next day, I write it down to remind myself.

× I think no because I you your forget something.

✓ I think no because I forget something.

句子中出现了多余的代词“you your”，导致句子结构混乱。应删除多余部分，保持主语和谓语一致。

× That I just saw that, you know, so I think I'm I'm really dumb. Good at it.

✓ I just saw that, you know, so I think I'm really dumb at it.

句子结构不完整，“That I just saw that”不符合英语表达习惯，应调整为完整句子。

× I think no becauses if something important I will remember it off and you know so I I really I will write the important thing in my nest and check it or that end.

✓ I think no because if something is important, I will remember it, and you know, I will write the important thing in my notes and check it at the end.

“becauses”拼写错误，应为“because”；缺少动词“is”；“nest”应为“notes”；“check it or that end”表达不清，应为“check it at the end”。

× So I think I have ever forgetting something important.

✓ So I think I have never forgotten something important.

“have ever forgetting”时态错误，应使用现在完成时的过去分词形式“have never forgotten”。

× Oh, I think the cross, cross time, 'cause in my daily life I needed to go to school, but every day is every day is across time are different, so I need to check the times and sure I don't miss anything close.

✓ Oh, I think the class times, because in my daily life I need to go to school, but every day's class times are different, so I need to check the times to make sure I don't miss any class.

“cross”应为“class”；“needed”时态错误，应为“need”；“every day is across time are different”结构混乱，应调整为“every day's class times are different”；“close”应为“class”。

× Oh, I think. I write the important thing in my, not. To check so to check them.

✓ Oh, I think I write the important things in my notes to check them.

“not”应为“notes”；句子断裂，应合并为完整句子。

× So for example if I needed to do something in next day I will write. Right it rising in my nest. In the. Nasty.

✓ So for example, if I need to do something the next day, I will write it down in my notes.

“needed”时态错误，应为“need”；“next day”前应加定冠词“the”；“Right it rising in my nest. In the. Nasty.”表达混乱，应改为“write it down in my notes”。