记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用清晰的句子说明记忆方法。

範例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I am an organized person. For example, I create schedules and make notes, which help me remember important information.

建議: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，说明自己如何避免忘记重要事情，并用具体细节支持。

範例: No, I have never forgotten something important because I am very careful. I always make detailed notes and set multiple alarms to remind myself of important meetings.

建議: 回答中语法和用词错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议用完整句子直接回答问题，并用具体例子说明如何记忆日常事务。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my work schedule. If there are important meetings or extra tasks, I set reminders on my phone to make sure I don't forget them.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，影响表达清晰度。建议用简单明了的句子说明记忆方法，并举具体例子。

範例: I remember important things by making detailed notes and setting multiple alarms. For example, if I have a crucial meeting, I set three alarms to remind myself, which helps me stay organized.

× Yes, I'm good into memory things because according to the MBTI personality test I took online, I turned to be organized instructed.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorising things because according to the MBTI personality test I took online, I turned out to be organized and instructed.

介词使用错误，'good into' 应改为 'good at'，表示擅长某事。'turned to be' 应改为 'turned out to be'，表示结果是。

× Uhm how which helps me remember important information by creating schedule or making no days which improve my memory?

✓ Uhm, which helps me remember important information by creating schedules or making notes which improve my memory.

连词使用错误，句子结构混乱，应使用 'which' 引导定语从句，且 'schedule' 应为复数 'schedules'，'no days' 应为 'notes'。

× No, I really forgot something important because amoji tab person and I always make detail notice in remitters.

✓ No, I have never really forgotten something important because I am a meticulous person and I always make detailed notes in reminders.

时态错误，'forgot' 应用现在完成时 'have never really forgotten' 表示经历。单词拼写错误，'amoji tab person' 应为 'a meticulous person'，'detail notice in remitters' 应为 'detailed notes in reminders'。

× If I have an important meeting I might set 3 alarms to remind myself.

✓ If I have an important meeting, I might set 3 alarms to remind myself.

缺少逗号，影响句子结构清晰。

× So it's really happened on me.

✓ So it has really happened to me.

代词和介词搭配错误，'happened on me' 应为 'happened to me'。

× Well basically is my work schedule but if there have any important stuffs like important meeting or extra work.

✓ Well, basically it is my work schedule but if there is any important stuff like an important meeting or extra work.

单复数错误，'stuffs' 应为不可数名词 'stuff'，'have' 应为 'is'，主谓一致。

× I will side reminders in the same time to remind me don't message.

✓ I will set reminders at the same time to remind me not to forget.

介词和词语使用错误，'side reminders' 应为 'set reminders'，'in the same time' 应为 'at the same time'，'don't message' 应为 'not to forget'。

× Well, I actually have several message to help me to remember things such as making detailed duties in sidestory majors.

✓ Well, I actually have several messages to help me remember things such as making detailed notes in my diary.

量词错误，'message' 应为复数 'messages'，词汇错误，'duties' 应为 'notes'，'sidestory majors' 应为 'diary'。

× For example, if I have a crucial meeting and I said 3 old farms to remind myself, it helped me to stay organized.

✓ For example, if I have a crucial meeting, I set 3 old alarms to remind myself; it helps me to stay organized.

时态错误，条件句用现在时，主句用一般现在时。拼写错误，'said' 应为 'set'，'old farms' 应为 'old alarms'。