记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「memorizing something」より「memorizing things」の方が自然です。また、「world number and picture」は意味が不明瞭なので、具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。文を簡潔にし、より自然な表現を心がけてください。

範例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things because I enjoy learning English words and numbers, as well as remembering pictures.

建議: 内容は理解できますが、文法ミスや表現の繰り返しがあります。例えば、「friends birthday」は「friend's birthday」が正しいです。また、「I like the memorized number and words」は不自然なので、より明確に表現しましょう。接続詞を使って文をつなげると自然になります。

範例: Yes, I often forget my friend's birthday. Although I enjoy memorizing numbers and words, I find it difficult to remember birthdays.

建議: 文法の誤りが多く、特に「be 'cause」は不自然です。接続詞や文の構造を改善し、より明確に答えましょう。また、内容が少し繰り返し気味なので、具体的な例を加えると良いです。

範例: I need to remember English words and grammar because I am studying English education at university and often use English in my daily life.

建議: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「I already say」は不自然で、「I usually repeat」が適切です。文をつなげる接続詞を使い、簡潔で自然な表現を心がけてください。

範例: I usually remember important things by repeating them several times because repetition helps me memorize better.

× Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing something because I like to memorize English word and other things like world number and picture, so I think I'm good at it.

✓ Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things because I like to memorize English words and other things like world numbers and pictures, so I think I'm good at it.

The word 'something' should be plural 'things' to match the context. Also, 'word', 'number', and 'picture' should be plural to correctly refer to multiple items. This is a singular and plural issue combined with verb + -ing form usage.

× Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing something because I like to memorize English word and other things like world number and picture, so I think I'm good at it.

✓ Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things because I like to memorize English words and other things like world numbers and pictures, so I think I'm good at it.

The nouns 'word', 'number', and 'picture' should be plural ('words', 'numbers', 'pictures') because the speaker refers to multiple items. Using singular forms here is incorrect.

× Yes. I often forget my friends birthday. As I said, I like the memorized number and words, but I'm not good at memorizing my friends birthday.

✓ Yes. I often forget my friend's birthday. As I said, I like memorizing numbers and words, but I'm not good at memorizing my friend's birthday.

'Friends birthday' should be 'friend's birthday' to show possession. Also, 'memorized number' should be 'memorizing numbers' to correctly express the action and plural form.

× Yes. I often forget my friends birthday. As I said, I like the memorized number and words, but I'm not good at memorizing my friends birthday.

✓ Yes. I often forget my friend's birthday. As I said, I like memorizing numbers and words, but I'm not good at memorizing my friend's birthday.

The definite article 'the' before 'memorized number' is incorrect here. It should be omitted or replaced with the gerund form 'memorizing' to express the action properly.

× I have to memorize English words and grammar be 'cause I'm studying English education in my university and I often use English, so I have to remember a lot of English words.

✓ I have to memorize English words and grammar because I'm studying English education at my university and I often use English, so I have to remember a lot of English words.

The phrase 'grammar be 'cause' is incorrect; it should be 'grammar because'. Also, 'in my university' should be 'at my university' as the correct preposition for institutions.

× I have to memorize English words and grammar be 'cause I'm studying English education in my university and I often use English, so I have to remember a lot of English words.

✓ I have to memorize English words and grammar because I'm studying English education at my university and I often use English, so I have to remember a lot of English words.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to studying at a university; the correct preposition is 'at'.

× I already say something important again and again. I think the best way of remembering something is. Repeating so I always repeating something that I want to remember.

✓ I already say important things again and again. I think the best way of remembering something is repeating, so I always repeat something that I want to remember.

The sentence has several issues: 'I already say' should be 'I say'; 'something important' is better as 'important things'; the sentence 'the best way of remembering something is.' is incomplete and should be connected to 'repeating'; 'I always repeating' should be 'I always repeat'. These are sentence structure and verb form errors.