记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达稍显不自然，建议简化句子结构，避免多余词汇，并使用更地道的表达方式。

範例: Yes, I have a good memory and can quickly remember phone numbers and prices.

建議: 回答内容清晰，但句子衔接略显生硬，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅自然。

範例: Yes, once my family planned a trip abroad, but when we arrived at the airport, I realized I had forgotten my passport.

建議: 回答中出现拼写错误且句子结构不够清晰，建议注意拼写并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I need to remember many numbers in my daily life because my major is finance, so I have to focus on prices and indexes.

建議: 句子结构不够准确，存在语法错误，建议简化表达并注意主谓一致。

範例: I usually write down important tasks on a note and frequently check it to make sure I complete everything.

× Yes, I have really a good memory and I can remember the phone numbers or the prices quickly.

✓ Yes, I really have a good memory and I can remember phone numbers or prices quickly.

副词'really'的位置错误，应该放在助动词'have'之后，修饰整个谓语部分。

× When we arrived at the airport, I finally found that I forgot my passport.

✓ When we arrived at the airport, I finally found that I had forgotten my passport.

此处涉及过去完成时，表示在过去某一时间之前已经发生的动作，'forgot'应改为过去完成时'had forgotten'。

× I think I need to rim remember a lot of numbers in my daily life because my major is finance so I need to keep focusing on the prices and index.

✓ I think I need to remember a lot of numbers in my daily life because my major is finance, so I need to keep focusing on prices and indexes.

'rim'是拼写错误，应删除；'the prices and index'中，'index'应为复数形式'indexes'，且不需要定冠词'the'。

× I usually write down all the important task are on a note and then I will frequently check the notes to make sure that I accomplish everything on the note.

✓ I usually write down all the important tasks on a note and then I frequently check the notes to make sure that I accomplish everything on the note.

'task'应为复数形式'tasks'，且句中多余的'are'应删除。