记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích hoặc bổ sung chi tiết bằng cách sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often get busy and distracted. However, recently I've been trying to improve my short-term memory by practicing daily exercises.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu chủ đề và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I often forget important things when I leave my house, such as locking the door or turning off the lights. This makes me feel worried and careless.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt còn lủng củng và thiếu liên kết. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

範例: I usually write notes to remind myself of daily tasks and things I need to bring when I leave the house. Sometimes, I also set alarms to make sure I don't forget important appointments.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu chủ đề, bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I usually set alarms to remind me of important tasks. Sometimes, I also ask my parents to remind me about what I need to do or bring when I leave the house.

× I'm not good at in memorizing because not I'm so busy an I think my long term memory.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing because I'm so busy and I think my long term memory is weak.

The phrase 'good at in memorizing' is incorrect; the preposition 'in' should be removed after 'good at'. Also, 'not I'm so busy' is incorrect word order; it should be 'I'm so busy'. The conjunction 'an' should be 'and'. The sentence also lacks a verb after 'long term memory', so 'is weak' is added for clarity.

× As. Oh, so like quick an.

✓ It's like quick, and...

The sentence fragment 'As. Oh, so like quick an.' is incomplete and uses 'an' instead of 'and'. It should be connected properly to form a complete thought.

× Now nowadays I am trying to practice more about short term memory skills.

✓ Nowadays, I am trying to practice short term memory skills more.

The phrase 'practice more about' is incorrect; 'practice' is a verb that does not require 'about'. The adverb 'nowadays' should be placed at the beginning for clarity.

× Especially when I get out my home, I just forget that just unlock the door or just I turn off my microwave or just like turn off light an I feel really honest and I feel very.

✓ Especially when I leave my home, I just forget to unlock the door or to turn off my microwave or to turn off the light, and I feel really bad and embarrassed.

The phrase 'get out my home' should be 'leave my home'. The verb 'forget' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb (e.g., 'forget to unlock'). 'Turn off light' needs the definite article 'the'. 'An' should be 'and'. 'Feel really honest' is incorrect; likely intended 'feel really bad' or 'embarrassed'.

× Always have a not E memorize me about what I need to do in one day and what I need to bring when I get out my house and sometime I set the alarm to notice me in the on time and.

✓ I always have a note to remind me about what I need to do in one day and what I need to bring when I leave my house, and sometimes I set an alarm to notify me on time.

'Not E' should be 'note'. 'Memorize me' is incorrect; 'remind me' is correct. 'Get out my house' should be 'leave my house'. 'Notice me in the on time' is incorrect; 'notify me on time' is correct. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'.

× To me it's like exactly that. I never forgot some things.

✓ To me, it's exactly like that. I never forget some things.

Added comma after 'To me' for clarity. 'Forgot' is past tense; since the context is present, 'forget' is correct.

× Well, yeah, I said alarms an. Make me have the finished and let lie in time and sometimes it's on time and sometimes I asked half from my parents that they can notice me what I need to do or what I need to bring when I get out my house.

✓ Well, yeah, I set alarms. They help me finish tasks and be on time. Sometimes I ask my parents to remind me what I need to do or what I need to bring when I leave my house.

'I said alarms an' should be 'I set alarms'. 'Make me have the finished and let lie in time' is unclear; corrected to 'They help me finish tasks and be on time'. 'Asked half from my parents' is incorrect; should be 'ask my parents'. 'Notice me' should be 'remind me'. 'Get out my house' should be 'leave my house'.