记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，避免重复和无关内容，使用正确的语法结构。

範例: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorising things because I often remember important dates and information without much effort.

建議: 回答中断断续续，表达不连贯，缺乏清晰的句子结构。建议使用完整句子，清楚描述忘记的重要事情，并避免重复和语无伦次。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as exam dates, which caused me to miss an important test.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的地方，建议使用完整句子，明确列举需要记住的事项，并注意发音和用词准确。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments with doctors and friends, important phone numbers, and my friends' names.

建議: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不完整。建议使用连贯的句子，清楚描述记忆方法，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I usually keep track of important dates and times on my phone calendar. Additionally, I make a to-do list on a whiteboard and tick off tasks when completed. I also try to memorize important information by repeating it several times.

× Home Depot. Are you good at my? You good at memorizing things? Yes, I consider myself quite good at memory things for Sam.

✓ Are you good at memorizing things? Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorizing things.

句子中“Are you good at my?”使用了错误的代词“my”，应使用动名词短语“memorizing things”来表达记忆能力。建议使用正确的代词和动名词形式。

× Yes, I consider myself quite good at memory things for Sam.

✓ Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorizing things.

“memory things”用法不正确，应使用动名词“memorizing things”来表达记忆某事的能力。

× I'm not good at memorizing things, therefore I have forgotten something extremely important, for example like the exam dates.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things; therefore, I have forgotten something extremely important, for example, the exam dates.

句中“therefore”前应使用分号或句号分隔，且“for example like”重复，应简化为“for example”。

× Like. I miss the important exam and. Aye. Have forgotten. Oh, White.

✓ For example, I missed an important exam and have forgotten it.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，建议重组句子使其完整且连贯。

× I need to remember the days I make appointment with the doctors, with my friends, an I have to remember the.

✓ I need to remember the days I make appointments with the doctors and with my friends.

“make appointment with”应为复数“make appointments with”，且连接词使用不当，需用“and”连接。

× I need to remember the days I make appointment with the doctors, with my friends, an I have to remember the.

✓ I need to remember the days I make appointments with the doctors and with my friends.

“appointment”应为复数“appointments”，因为指多个约会。

× an I have to remember the. The numbers which for the gays and I have to remember my friends names.

✓ I have to remember the numbers for the days, and I have to remember my friends' names.

句子断裂且表达不清，需重组句子并修正拼写错误“gays”为“days”，使句意明确。

× I keep track of dates and times in my phone calendar and I also made it To Do List with the white board so that when I've complete.

✓ I keep track of dates and times in my phone calendar, and I also make a To-Do List on the whiteboard so that when I've completed tasks,

“made it To Do List with the white board”表达不当，应为“make a To-Do List on the whiteboard”，且时态需一致。

× so that when I've complete.

✓ so that when I've completed tasks,

“complete”应为过去分词“completed”，因为与现在完成时“I've”连用。

× Things I put a take on it.

✓ I put a tick on it.

“put a take on it”表达错误，应为“put a tick on it”，表示打勾。

× Also I tried to memorize it like. By reciting them and. And also too.

✓ Also, I try to memorize them by reciting them.

句子中“like. By reciting them and. And also too.”结构混乱，重复使用连词，建议简化为“try to memorize them by reciting them”。