记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, try to be more specific about what helps you memorize better.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I find it easier to remember subjects that interest me, such as history, compared to those I like less. Additionally, I can quickly memorise pictures and numbers, which helps me in my studies.

建議: Try to avoid repeating the same idea and be more concise. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, provide a clear example to support your answer.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, I once forgot to bring my exam ticket, which was quite stressful. However, I believe making mistakes is a normal part of being human.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on giving a direct answer with specific examples. Use linking words to organise your ideas better.

範例: In daily life, I need to remember important values such as respecting elders and being kind to others. For example, I always try to smile and stay positive so that people feel happy around me.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. Be more specific about your method.

範例: I remember important things by making notes, either in a notebook or on my phone. Then, I regularly review these notes to ensure I haven't missed anything, which helps me stay organised.

× Is I'm quite good at memorizing things.

✓ I'm quite good at memorizing things.

The sentence incorrectly starts with 'Is' which is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct form is simply 'I'm quite good at memorizing things.' This is a sentence structure error where an auxiliary verb is wrongly added.

× Lee, the things or subjects Diane, I'm more interested in, I could memorize it more fastly compared to other subject which I have less interest.

✓ Like the things or subjects that I'm more interested in, I can memorize them faster compared to other subjects in which I have less interest.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun use ('it' referring to plural 'things or subjects') and awkward phrasing. 'It' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun. Also, 'fastly' is not a correct adverb form; 'faster' is appropriate here.

× So I know. I memorize things like pictures, numbers extra very fastly.

✓ So I know. I memorize things like pictures, numbers, etc. very fast.

The adverb 'fastly' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'fast'. Also, 'extra' is not appropriate here; 'etc.' (et cetera) is the correct abbreviation to indicate additional items.

× So I think it's normal for human behavior that every human make mistakes.

✓ So I think it's normal human behavior that every human makes mistakes.

The verb 'make' does not agree with the singular subject 'every human'. It should be 'makes' to match the singular subject.

× So that was an important thing that I forgot to take my whole ticket for my exam.

✓ So that was an important thing: I forgot to bring my exam ticket.

The phrase 'take my whole ticket' is awkward and incorrect. 'Bring my exam ticket' is the correct expression. Also, 'whole' is unnecessary here.

× There are lots of things that a person person should remember in our daily life because we should always keep values.

✓ There are lots of things that a person should remember in daily life because we should always keep values.

The word 'person' is repeated unnecessarily. Also, 'in our daily life' is better as 'in daily life' for general statements.

× Keep be Panjal, always respect elders, do something that's good and always be positive towards all the person with mean the smile at everyone.

✓ Keep being punctual, always respect elders, do good things, and always be positive towards all people, meaning smile at everyone.

The sentence has unclear and incorrect pronouns and words: 'Panjal' likely means 'punctual'; 'person' should be 'people'; 'with mean the smile' is incorrect and should be rephrased for clarity.

× Everyone should be happy while seeing us.

✓ Everyone should be happy when they see us.

The phrase 'while seeing us' is awkward; 'when they see us' is the correct and natural expression.

× I remember important things by noting it will not book.

✓ I remember important things by noting them in a notebook.

The phrase 'noting it will not book' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'noting them in a notebook' where 'in' is the correct preposition and 'them' refers to the things noted.

× I often read that and check if I have done anything wrong or not or if I forgot to do anything.

✓ I often read those notes and check if I have done anything wrong or if I forgot to do anything.

The pronoun 'that' is singular but should be plural 'those notes' to refer to multiple notes.

× So I make small notes or I add notes in my phone about the things that I have to do.

✓ So I make small notes or add notes on my phone about the things I have to do.

The preposition 'in' is less appropriate here; 'on my phone' is the correct phrase. Also, 'that' before 'I have to do' can be omitted for smoother flow.