记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct prepositions and verb forms, and try to be more concise. For example, say "I was really good at memorizing things as a child, but after my pregnancy, my short-term memory has weakened."

範例: I was really good at memorizing things when I was a child, but after my pregnancy, my short-term memory has become weaker.

建議: Your answer repeats words and has grammatical mistakes. To improve, avoid repetition, use correct verb tenses, and complete your thoughts clearly. For example, "Yes, I have forgotten important things quite often recently. Since my pregnancy, my short-term memory has been weak, so I frequently forget important dates and events. This has made me more cautious about marking dates on my calendar."

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things quite often recently. Since my pregnancy, my short-term memory has been weak, so I frequently forget important dates and events. This has made me more cautious about marking dates on my calendar.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. To improve, organize your ideas clearly, use correct prepositions, and avoid redundancy. For example, "In my daily life, I need to remember routine tasks such as house chores, going to work, and preparing healthy meals for my children to help them grow stronger."

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember routine tasks such as house chores, going to work, and preparing healthy meals for my children to help them grow stronger.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. To improve, avoid repetition, complete your sentences, and use linking words for coherence. For example, "Nowadays, my memory is not as strong as before, so I usually use calendars and to-do lists to remember important events and dates. This helps me stay organized, motivated, and active."

範例: Nowadays, my memory is not as strong as before, so I usually use calendars and to-do lists to remember important events and dates. This helps me stay organized, motivated, and active.

× When I was a child I was really good in memorizing the things, but later after my pregnancy my short term memory is not that long lasting.

✓ When I was a child I was really good at memorizing things, but later after my pregnancy my short-term memory has not been that long lasting.

The phrase 'good in' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'good at' when referring to skills. Also, 'the things' is unnecessarily definite; 'things' is sufficient. 'Short term' should be hyphenated as 'short-term' when used as an adjective. Additionally, to express a continuing state from past to present, 'has not been' is more appropriate than 'is not.'

× Yes, I have forgot forgot an important things quite often recently.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten important things quite often recently.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but after 'have' (present perfect), the past participle 'forgotten' is required. Also, 'an important things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'an.' It should be 'important things.'

× Yes, I have forgot forgot an important things quite often recently.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten important things quite often recently.

The quantifier 'an' is used with singular countable nouns, but 'things' is plural. Therefore, 'an' should be removed to correctly quantify the plural noun.

× For example, after my pregnancy my short term memory is weak. So because of that I forget the important dates and important events frequently.

✓ For example, after my pregnancy, my short-term memory has been weak. Because of that, I frequently forget important dates and events.

'Short term' should be hyphenated as 'short-term' when used as an adjective. The phrase 'So because of that' is redundant; 'Because of that' suffices. The adverb 'frequently' is better placed before the verb 'forget' for natural English word order. Also, 'the important dates and important events' can be simplified to 'important dates and events.'

× This made me more cautious about marking dates on calendar and also.

✓ This made me more cautious about marking dates on the calendar as well.

The phrase 'on calendar' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'calendar.' The sentence ends abruptly with 'and also,' which is incomplete; 'as well' is a better choice to complete the thought.

× In my daily life for mostly I have to remember my most frequent asked that I do in my daily basic life, for example like daily house chores, going at my job, coming back and making something like good for my children healthier and which make them healthier and stronger.

✓ In my daily life, I mostly have to remember the tasks I frequently do, such as daily house chores, going to my job, coming back, and making healthy food for my children that helps make them healthier and stronger.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'For mostly' is incorrect; 'mostly' should be placed appropriately. 'My most frequent asked' is unclear; it should be 'the tasks I frequently do.' 'Going at my job' should be 'going to my job.' The phrase 'making something like good for my children healthier' is awkward; it should be 'making healthy food for my children that helps make them healthier and stronger.' The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Nowadays my memory is not that strong as you as you as before.

✓ Nowadays, my memory is not as strong as it was before.

The phrase 'not that strong as you as you as before' is incorrect and repetitive. The correct comparative structure is 'not as strong as it was before.' The repetition 'as you as you as' is likely a mistake and should be removed.

× So I usually use calendars and To Do List to remind to remember important events and dates so that I will be more organized and also this has helped me to.

✓ So I usually use calendars and To-Do lists to help me remember important events and dates so that I can be more organized, and this has also helped me to

'To Do List' should be hyphenated as 'To-Do list' and pluralized if referring to multiple lists. The phrase 'to remind to remember' is redundant; 'to help me remember' is clearer. The sentence ends abruptly with 'helped me to,' which is incomplete and needs continuation.

× Be motivated and become active. Hold.

✓ be motivated and become active.

The words 'Be motivated and become active. Hold.' are fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence removes 'Hold' and connects the phrase properly as 'be motivated and become active.'