记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

範例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I always try to remember important events like school or meetings to avoid being late.

建議: 回答不够清晰，语法和词汇错误较多，建议用简单句表达自己的经历，并说明原因。

範例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I always try to be organized and careful.

建議: 回答表达混乱，语法错误多，建议明确说明手机如何帮助记忆，并使用连贯的句子。

範例: I need to remember appointments and tasks every day, so I use my mobile phone to set alarms and make schedules.

建議: 回答较为完整，但表达不够流畅，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意语法准确。

範例: To remember important things, I set alarms on my phone and write notes that I put on the notice board, so I see them often and don't forget.

× I think I'm really good at memorizing things because I think it's really implied to forget something important, for example late for school or a meetings.

✓ I think I'm really good at memorizing things because I think it's really easy to forget something important, for example being late for school or a meeting.

这里 'implied' 用错了，应该用形容词 'easy' 来表达“容易忘记”的意思；'a meetings' 中 'meetings' 是复数，前面用单数冠词 'a' 错误，应改为单数 'a meeting'。

× I think I'm really good at memorizing things because I think it's really implied to forget something important, for example late for school or a meetings.

✓ I think I'm really good at memorizing things because I think it's really easy to forget something important, for example being late for school or a meeting.

'a meetings' 中 'meetings' 是复数，前面用单数冠词 'a' 错误，应改为单数 'a meeting'。

× So I will always bear in mind to avoid these situations.

✓ So I will always bear in mind to avoid these situations.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Actually I said ah forget anything important because I think it's way it may make me feel akward and apologize.

✓ Actually I haven't forgotten anything important because I think it may make me feel awkward and I would have to apologize.

'said' 用错时态，应使用现在完成时 'haven't forgotten' 来表达至今未忘记；'akward' 拼写错误，应为 'awkward'；句子结构不完整，补充 'I would have to apologize' 使句意完整。

× Actually I said ah forget anything important because I think it's way it may make me feel akward and apologize.

✓ Actually I haven't forgotten anything important because I think it may make me feel awkward and I would have to apologize.

'akward' 拼写错误，应为 'awkward'。

× I will always stay in orgonite.

✓ I will always stay organized.

'orgonite' 拼写错误，应为 'organized'，表示“有条理的”。

× I think mobile phone is necessary to me to remember something important.

✓ I think a mobile phone is necessary for me to remember something important.

'mobile phone' 前缺少冠词 'a'，因为这里指的是单数可数名词。

× He might daily life because I will.

✓ This sentence is unclear and should be removed or rewritten for clarity.

句子结构混乱，无法理解，应重写或删除。

× Always said from alarm to notice me don't forget something an I always make timetable on it.

✓ I always set an alarm to remind me not to forget something, and I always make a timetable on it.

'said from alarm to notice me' 用法错误，应改为 'set an alarm to remind me'；'an' 应为 'and'；缺少冠词 'a timetable'。

× I have to message to remember important things first.

✓ I have to send messages to remember important things first.

'message' 作为动词时应使用 'send messages'，原句结构不完整。

× I will set alarm on my phone in other ones and I will also write some notes and put them on the notice board place so that every time I see it I will.

✓ I will set alarms on my phone and other devices, and I will also write some notes and put them on the notice board so that every time I see them, I will remember.

'set alarm on my phone in other ones' 结构错误，应为 'set alarms on my phone and other devices'；'notice board place' 多余，应简化为 'notice board'；'see it' 应改为 'see them'，指代复数 'notes'。

× Remember it again.

✓ Remember them again.

'it' 指代不明确，应改为复数 'them'，与前文 'notes' 一致。