记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word usage.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I often remember important moments like family dinners or special events because they hold great value in my life.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use correct grammar and sentence structure to clearly explain the situation. Include linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about what you forgot and the consequences.

範例: Yes, about a year ago, I forgot the location of my friend's wedding, which was held on Allen Highway on 20th March 2024. Because of this, I arrived late and missed the beginning of the ceremony.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state what you need to remember daily, using proper sentence structure and relevant vocabulary. Use linking words to organise your points logically.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks related to my dairy business, such as feeding and bathing the animals, doing calculations for sales, and monitoring their health and milk production.

建議: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. To improve, directly answer how you remember important things, mention specific methods like note-taking or routines, and explain briefly with linking words.

範例: I usually write important things down in my notebook to remember them. Also, by following a daily routine and practising tasks regularly for about 21 days, I find it easier to remember them.

× Yes, my payment remember used to tell me that I'm memorizing dead particular things such as some past memories or some moments which was important in our life and in daily life.

✓ Yes, my parents used to tell me that I memorize particular things such as past memories or moments which were important in our life and daily life.

The original sentence misuses 'payment remember' which seems to be a typo for 'parents'. 'Used to tell' is correct for past habitual action. 'I'm memorizing dead particular things' is incorrect; 'memorizing' should be simple present 'memorize' to express a general habit. 'Was' should be 'were' to agree with plural 'moments'. The phrase 'dead particular things' is unclear and likely a mistake, so it is corrected to 'particular things'.

× I usually memorize things such as a good moments and having good dinner with family members and so on.

✓ I usually memorize things such as good moments and having good dinners with family members and so on.

The phrase 'a good moments' is incorrect because 'moments' is plural and should not have the singular article 'a'. Also, 'good dinner' can be pluralized to 'good dinners' to match the plural context. Articles and noun number must agree.

× Yes our one year ago on one of my friends wedding which was on 20th March 2024 and I just lost the location of his marriage ceremony.

✓ Yes, one year ago at one of my friend's weddings which was on 20th March 2024, I just lost the location of his marriage ceremony.

The phrase 'our one year ago' is incorrect; it should be 'one year ago'. 'On one of my friends wedding' should be 'at one of my friend's weddings' to indicate location and possessive form. 'Lost the location' is acceptable but could be better as 'got lost on the way to the marriage ceremony'. Past tense 'was' is correct here.

× It was on on Allen Highway but unfortunately I I evento towards.

✓ It was on Allen Highway but unfortunately I got lost on the way.

The sentence has repetition 'on on' and 'I I evento towards' which is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Evento' is not an English word; likely intended 'went' or 'got lost'. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects structure.

× I own dairy business and I used to use to do math, used to bath my animals at my dairy farm and also extract milk from that and then I used to watch their mod and littering of October.

✓ I own a dairy business and I do math, bathe my animals at my dairy farm, extract milk from them, and then I watch their mood and littering in October.

'Used to use to do math' is incorrect; 'used to' indicates past habit but the context is present. So simple present 'do math' is appropriate. 'Used to bath' should be 'bathe'. 'Extract milk from that' should be 'extract milk from them' referring to animals. 'Watch their mod and littering of October' likely means 'watch their mood and littering in October'. Present tense is used for current habitual actions.

× I just not down such important things in my notebook.

✓ I just note down such important things in my notebook.

'Not down' is incorrect; the correct phrasal verb is 'note down' meaning to write something. The verb 'note' requires the particle 'down' as a preposition to complete the meaning.

× Can I usually follow my daily routine.

✓ I usually follow my daily routine.

The original sentence 'Can I usually follow my daily routine.' is incorrect because 'Can I' is a question form but the sentence lacks question structure. The intended meaning is a statement, so 'I usually follow my daily routine.' is correct.

× So if you would have to have it some things they have to practice that thing for I think 2021 for 21 days and easily.

✓ So if you want to remember something, you have to practice it for, I think, 21 days, and then it becomes easy.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'If you would have to have it some things' is incorrect; it should be 'if you want to remember something'. 'They have to practice that thing for I think 2021 for 21 days' is confusing; corrected to 'you have to practice it for 21 days'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.