记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“wear learning”应为“when learning”，句子结构不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误，同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: To be honest, I am not very good at memorising things, especially when learning a foreign language or remembering formulas. For example, I find it difficult to remember math formulas or new vocabulary words, which makes studying quite challenging for me.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“mirror eyes”应为“memory”，句子结构混乱。建议直接回答问题，并用简单清晰的句子说明原因，避免使用错误词汇。

範例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I know my memory is not very good. Therefore, I always write important tasks in my daily To-Do List, which helps me remember everything and avoid missing anything important.

建議: 回答中有大量拼写和语法错误，句子不通顺，内容不明确。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并提供具体的例子。

範例: As a student, I need to remember many things in my daily life. For example, I have to keep track of my expenses to manage my budget. I also need to remember to finish and submit my homework on time.

建議: 回答中表达不清，语法错误较多，句子不完整。建议用简单句子清晰表达如何记忆重要事情，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

範例: If I have an assignment to finish today, I will set an alarm to remind me. For tasks in the future, I write them in my daily To-Do List and check it regularly to avoid missing anything important.

× I think I am not very good at memorizing things especially when I wear learning some foreign language or remembering the formula.

✓ I think I am not very good at memorizing things especially when I am learning some foreign language or remembering formulas.

The phrase 'wear learning' is incorrect; it should be 'am learning' to use the present continuous tense correctly. Also, 'formula' should be plural 'formulas' to match the context of multiple items to memorize.

× For example, I find is difficult to for me to record math formula or learn new vocabulary words.

✓ For example, I find it difficult to record math formulas or learn new vocabulary words.

The sentence has extra words 'is' and 'for me to' which make it ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'I find it difficult to...' followed by the verbs in base form. Also, 'formula' should be plural 'formulas'.

× It makes starting a big challenging for me sometimes.

✓ It makes starting a big challenge for me sometimes.

The phrase 'a big challenging' is incorrect because 'challenging' is an adjective. The noun form 'challenge' should be used here.

× I think this is because I know my mirror eyes is not very good so I always watching done important things in my daily To Do List on this action.

✓ I think this is because I know my memory is not very good, so I always watch important things in my daily To Do List to help me remember.

'Mirror eyes' is incorrect; it should be 'memory'. 'Watching done important things' is ungrammatical; 'watch' is not the correct verb here, and 'done' is unnecessary. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Help me remember everything I need to do an award missing anything important.

✓ It helps me remember everything I need to do and avoid missing anything important.

'An award missing' is incorrect; it should be 'and avoid missing'. The verb 'help' needs a subject and proper conjunction to connect ideas.

× As a student, I need to remember survivor involving francs in my daily lives.

✓ As a student, I need to remember survival involving finances in my daily life.

'Survivor' should be 'survival' and 'francs' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'finances'. 'Lives' should be singular 'life' to match 'a student'.

× For example, I've have to keep track of my coast to mechanize my back Jack Bout in earth diction.

✓ For example, I have to keep track of my costs to manage my budget in education.

'I've have' is incorrect; it should be 'I have'. 'Coast' should be 'costs'. 'Mechanize my back Jack Bout in earth diction' is unclear and likely meant to be 'manage my budget in education'.

× I also need to remember to send to finish my homework on time.

✓ I also need to remember to finish my homework on time.

'Remember to send to finish' is incorrect; 'send' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'remember to finish'.

× If this is assignment I need to finish today, I will set a clock and to to help me remember this text if is a text I need to finish in the future.

✓ If this is an assignment I need to finish today, I will set a clock to help me remember. If it is a task I need to finish in the future,

The sentence is run-on and contains repeated words 'and to to'. It is corrected by splitting into two sentences and fixing article usage and verb forms.

× Are you writing this text in the daily To Do List? The Ann? I will check it regularly to help me avoid missing.

✓ I write this task in the daily To Do List. I will check it regularly to help me avoid missing it.

'Are you writing' is incorrect in this context; the student should say 'I write'. 'The Ann?' is unclear and removed. The sentence is corrected for clarity and pronoun use.