记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains several language errors and irrelevant words, which affect naturalness and coherence. Try to respond directly with clear sentences, avoid unnecessary or incorrect words, and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant to the question.

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things in general, but I can remember events that have strong emotions attached to them. For example, unusual experiences or moments that inspire me tend to stay in my memory clearly.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some vocabulary mistakes and unclear phrases. To improve, use correct vocabulary and provide a clear, concise story with linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, when I was in elementary school, I forgot my pencil case at home on the day of an important exam, which was very stressful because I had nothing to write with.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains several grammar and vocabulary errors, and some unclear phrases. To improve, use correct vocabulary, avoid repetition, and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details connected with linking words.

範例: I need to remember my daily routine because I have several important activities after school. For example, I attend piano classes, so it's essential to manage my time well and not miss any commitments.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct sentence structures and clearer expressions. Also, provide a concise example linked with your method of remembering.

範例: I usually remember important things by writing them down in a to-do list. For example, on my way to school, I check the list to remind myself of tasks so I don't forget anything important.

× I'm not very good at memorizing thing in Janik, but sometime I can remember certain events very clearly, especially if they have a strong emotion in pygame.

✓ I'm not very good at memorizing things in Janik, but sometimes I can remember certain events very clearly, especially if they have a strong emotion in pygame.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items in general. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. This correction ensures proper singular/plural agreement and correct adverb usage.

× I'm not very good at memorizing thing in Janik, but sometime I can remember certain events very clearly, especially if they have a strong emotion in pygame.

✓ I'm not very good at memorizing things in Janik, but sometimes I can remember certain events very clearly, especially if they have a strong emotion in pygame.

The word 'sometime' is an adverb meaning 'at some unspecified time' but here the intended meaning is frequency, so 'sometimes' is correct. This improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× For example, moment Let's inspire me or experiences lots are unusual tend to stay in my memory.

✓ For example, moments that inspire me or unusual experiences tend to stay in my memory.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Moment Let's inspire me' is incorrect; it should be 'moments that inspire me'. Also, 'experiences lots are unusual' is incorrect; it should be 'unusual experiences'. This correction improves sentence clarity and structure.

× Yes, I have forgotten something important before for instant.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important before, for instance.

The phrase 'for instant' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'for instance' meaning 'for example'. This is a vocabulary correction rather than tense, but it improves clarity.

× When I was in elementary school, I once forgot my pencil case at home on the day of importing exam.

✓ When I was in elementary school, I once forgot my pencil case at home on the day of an important exam.

The word 'importing' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'important'. This is a vocabulary error affecting meaning.

× It was Christ grateful because I didn't have anything to write with.

✓ It was quite stressful because I didn't have anything to write with.

The phrase 'Christ grateful' is incorrect and unclear. Possibly a mishearing or typo. 'Quite stressful' or 'very stressful' fits the context better. This correction improves meaning and clarity.

× I need to remember my daily routine because I have several importing activity to attend after school.

✓ I need to remember my daily routine because I have several important activities to attend after school.

'Activity' should be plural 'activities' because 'several' indicates more than one. Also, 'importing' should be 'important'. This correction fixes plural agreement and adjective usage.

× For example, I have a piano class, so it is essential is to manage my time well and not to miss any of liscom instant. Commitment.

✓ For example, I have a piano class, so it is essential to manage my time well and not to miss any commitments.

The phrase 'it is essential is to' is incorrect; the extra 'is' should be removed. 'Liscom instant. Commitment' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'commitments' fits the context. This correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Are usually remember important things by writing land down in A to do list.

✓ I usually remember important things by writing them down in a to-do list.

The original sentence has a missing subject 'I' and incorrect words 'land' and 'A' capitalised unnecessarily. 'Writing land down' should be 'writing them down'. This correction fixes sentence structure and word choice.

× For example, on my way to school I remind myself to track the list so I don't forget anything important.

✓ For example, on my way to school I remind myself to check the list so I don't forget anything important.

The verb 'track' is incorrect in this context; 'check' is the appropriate verb for reviewing a list. This correction improves verb usage and clarity.