记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态和词汇。

範例: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget important stuff. I think my short-term memory is quite weak.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免重复，并补充细节使内容更具体。

範例: Yes, last month I forgot my ID card on the road. It really affected me because I spent a lot of time looking for it and applying for a new one.

建議: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且有些重复。建议分句表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Well, the most important things I need to remember are the knowledge from my textbooks. I have many exams coming up, including the mid-term and the CFA exam, so I must remember all the key points.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

範例: For important things, I usually write notes on my phone to remind myself. This method helps me because I tend to forget important matters.

× Actually no, because I always forgot forgot something that is very important.

✓ Actually no, because I always forget something that is very important.

这里使用了过去式 'forgot'，但句子表达的是经常发生的情况，应使用一般现在时 'forget'。

× I just have this short term memory about all of the stuff.

✓ I just have this short-term memory about all of the stuff.

短语 'short term memory' 应该用连字符连接为 'short-term memory'，表示复合形容词。

× About last month I forgot my ID card on the road and is really impact me because I paid a lot of time to to find it and find and apply for a new one.

✓ About last month I forgot my ID card on the road and it really impacted me because I spent a lot of time finding it and applying for a new one.

句中 'is really impact me' 时态和主谓不一致，应改为过去式 'it really impacted me'。'paid a lot of time' 应改为 'spent a lot of time'，'to to find it and find and apply' 结构重复且不正确，应改为 'finding it and applying'。

× Well the most important thing to remember is the knowledge on the test book because I'm now facing a lot of exams including mid term exam and the CFA exam, so I have to remember all of the knowledge of these subjects.

✓ Well, the most important thing to remember is the knowledge in the test book because I'm now facing a lot of exams including the mid-term exam and the CFA exam, so I have to remember all of the knowledge of these subjects.

'knowledge on the test book' 应改为 'knowledge in the test book'，表示知识包含在书中。'mid term exam' 应加连字符为 'mid-term exam'。

× Well, for something that is really important, I would write them down on the notes on my phone to remind me of its importance.

✓ Well, for something that is really important, I would write it down in the notes on my phone to remind me of its importance.

'something' 是单数，代词应使用单数 'it'，而不是复数 'them'。另外，'on the notes' 应改为 'in the notes'，表示写入笔记。

× Is really important for me to do this because I always forget something that is really important.

✓ It is really important for me to do this because I always forget something that is really important.

句子缺少主语，应加上 'It' 作为形式主语，使句子完整。