记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I pay close attention to details. For example, I can easily remember important dates and events in my life, which helps me stay organised.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể với từ nối phù hợp.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, especially when I was very busy with many tasks. Because of the heavy workload, I sometimes failed to remember some important details.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để làm rõ ý. Hãy mô tả cụ thể những việc bạn cần nhớ và cách bạn ghi chú.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks like appointments and errands. To help me, I write everything down in my notebook and tick off each task once I complete it.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích cách bạn ghi chú và tổ chức công việc để nhớ các việc quan trọng.

範例: I remember important things by writing them down in my notebook. I make a list of tasks and check them off as I complete each one to ensure I don't forget anything.

× I'm a good remembering person.

✓ I'm good at remembering things.

The phrase 'good remembering person' is incorrect because 'remembering' is a verb form and cannot directly modify 'person' as an adjective. The correct expression is 'good at remembering things' where 'good at' is followed by a gerund verb form to indicate ability.

× I can remember that in a detail.

✓ I can remember that in detail.

The phrase 'in a detail' is incorrect because 'detail' in this context is an uncountable noun and does not require the indefinite article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'in detail' meaning thoroughly or carefully.

× Yes, I used to forgot something important because at that time I had a lot of jobs, so I had a lot of tasks or that's why I cannot remember a something important.

✓ Yes, I used to forget something important because at that time I had a lot of jobs, so I had a lot of tasks, and that's why I could not remember something important.

The phrase 'used to forgot' is incorrect because 'used to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, which is 'forget'. Also, 'cannot' should be in past tense 'could not' to match the past context. The article 'a' before 'something' is unnecessary and incorrect.

× I write out all the things I need to do in our daily lives.

✓ I write out all the things I need to do in my daily life.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to their own daily life, so 'my' is appropriate. Also, 'daily life' is singular as it refers to the routine of one person.

× Salt. I jacket if if I finish one thing, I will. Jacket to make me remember. I done.

✓ Sorry, I meant I check off tasks. If I finish one thing, I will check it off to help me remember that I am done.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words like 'Salt' and 'jacket' which seem to be misused. The intended meaning is likely about marking tasks as done, so 'check off' is the correct phrase. Also, 'I done' is incorrect; it should be 'I am done' or 'I have done it'.

× I write down in my notebook I have not worked and I write out all the the list of my task in it to make sure I can remember all the important things.

✓ I write down in my notebook what I have not done, and I write out the list of my tasks in it to make sure I can remember all the important things.

The phrase 'I have not worked' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'what I have not done' to indicate unfinished tasks. Also, 'the the list' has a repeated article and 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the list. The preposition 'in' is correctly used with 'notebook'.