记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать простые и правильные предложения, избегать повторов и неясных выражений. Постарайтесь начать с прямого ответа на вопрос, затем добавьте конкретные детали, используя связующие слова.

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially people's names. For example, I often forget names shortly after meeting someone, so I try to focus more when I am introduced to new people.

建議: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок. Следует отвечать прямо, использовать правильную грамматику и связные предложения. Добавьте конкретный пример, используя связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once I forgot the time of my lesson at school because I was busy, which made me late for teaching my students.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать простые и понятные предложения, четко отвечать на вопрос и добавлять конкретные детали с помощью связующих слов.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule and tasks. Therefore, I make notes and keep a routine, which helps me avoid forgetting important things.

建議: Ответ содержит много повторов и грамматических ошибок. Рекомендуется использовать связные и правильные предложения, четко объяснять методы запоминания с конкретными примерами.

範例: To remember important things, I usually set alarms and use my calendar. This helps me keep track of my schedule and avoid forgetting tasks.

× Actually I'm not think I'm good at memorizing because I usually for get UM. Peoples name.

✓ Actually, I don't think I'm good at memorizing because I usually forget people's names.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm not think' instead of 'I don't think' which is the correct present tense negative form. Also, 'for get' should be 'forget' as one word, and 'Peoples name' should be 'people's names' to show possession and plural form.

× So maybe this is I need to work with my with myself?

✓ So maybe I need to work on myself.

The phrase 'this is I need to work with my with myself' is incorrect and confusing. The correct expression is 'I need to work on myself' to indicate self-improvement.

× Peoples name.

✓ People's names.

'Peoples' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'people's' with an apostrophe to indicate possession, and 'name' should be plural 'names' because it refers to multiple names.

× Yes, of course I usually forget about my lesson because I at school I usually work at because it's cool.

✓ Yes, of course I usually forget about my lessons because at school I usually work, and it's cool.

The sentence has awkward structure and missing words. 'I at school I usually work at' is incorrect; it should be 'at school I usually work'. Also, 'lesson' should be plural 'lessons' to match 'usually' implying multiple instances.

× I work as a teacher so one day I I need to have a lesson with my children but I forgot them.

✓ I work as a teacher, so one day I needed to have a lesson with my children but I forgot it.

'Forgot them' is incorrect because 'lesson' is singular and should be referred to as 'it'. Also, 'I need' should be past tense 'I needed' to match the past context.

× I forgot it time.

✓ I forgot the time.

The phrase 'forgot it time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'forgot the time' to indicate forgetting the scheduled time.

× I usually forget things that important.

✓ I usually forget things that are important.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' to connect 'things' and 'important'. The correct form is 'things that are important'.

× To remember my daily life and so I need to do and notes to my data routine.

✓ To remember my daily life, I need to make notes for my daily routine.

The phrase 'do and notes to my data routine' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'make notes for my daily routine' to express the intended meaning.

× Maybe it helps me to remember my daily schedule.

✓ Maybe it helps me remember my daily schedule.

The phrase 'helps me to remember' is acceptable but 'helps me remember' is more natural and concise in English.

× To remember important things I need, I need to make a notice because I usually forward the things.

✓ To remember important things, I need to make a note because I usually forget things.

'Make a notice' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a note'. Also, 'forward the things' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'forget things'.

× That's why I said alarm on my, I said, I said my calendars to keep track of, to keep track of, to remember my schedule.

✓ That's why I set an alarm on my calendar to keep track of and remember my schedule.

'Said alarm' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'set an alarm'. Also, 'calendars' should be singular 'calendar' if referring to one device or app. The repetition is unnecessary and confusing.