记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I'm not very good at memorizing things like numbers or my colleagues' names. However, I usually write them down to help me remember better.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Focus on giving a clear and direct response with specific details, and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I once forgot important medical instructions for a patient, which was very frustrating and embarrassing. However, I learned from that experience and now I make sure to double-check important information.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your idea with specific supporting details using linking words to connect your thoughts logically.

範例: In my daily life, I believe it's important to remember to work hard because effort is more useful and necessary than just relying on knowledge alone.

建議: Your answer is somewhat understandable but contains hesitations and awkward phrasing. Try to speak more fluently with complete sentences and use linking words to explain your methods clearly.

範例: Recently, I have been making notes of important things and repeating them several times to help me memorize crucial information in my life.

× Fortunately not, I can't handle at memorizing things such as numbers were name of my colleagues and this is actually disappointing for me sometimes, but I.

✓ Fortunately not, I can't handle memorizing things such as numbers or the names of my colleagues, and this is actually disappointing for me sometimes.

The phrase 'handle at memorizing' is incorrect; the verb 'handle' should be followed directly by the gerund without 'at'. Also, 'were name' is incorrect; it should be 'or the names' to correctly list examples. The sentence was also incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.

× Choose writing on somewhere or noting too. Memorize that.

✓ I choose to write somewhere or take notes too to memorize that.

The phrase 'Choose writing on somewhere or noting too' is ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'choose to write somewhere or take notes' to indicate the action of writing or noting things down. 'Noting' should be 'take notes' for clarity.

× Yes, sometimes I forgot that the meter mitted of a how to restore and the cavities for my patient.

✓ Yes, sometimes I forgot the method of how to restore and the cavities for my patient.

The phrase 'meter mitted of a how to restore' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misspelling. Assuming it means 'method of how to restore'. Also, 'forgot' is correct past tense, but the sentence structure is awkward and needs correction for clarity.

× It was so frustrating and I was so shameful.

✓ It was so frustrating and I was so ashamed.

'Shameful' is an adjective describing something that causes shame, but here the speaker wants to express their feeling, so 'ashamed' (an adjective describing a feeling) is correct.

× But after that I realized I can do it.

✓ But after that, I realized I could do it.

Since 'realized' is past tense, the following verb should be in past tense as well ('could' instead of 'can') to maintain tense consistency.

× One of the most important things that I believe. In my daily life is. Hard working.

✓ One of the most important things that I believe in my daily life is hard work.

'Hard working' is an adjective describing a person, but here the noun 'hard work' is needed to describe the important thing. Also, the sentence fragments need to be combined into a complete sentence.

× More than useful and necessary out of your knowledge and your brain.

✓ It is more useful and necessary than just relying on your knowledge and your brain.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The phrase 'More than useful and necessary out of your knowledge and your brain' is ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects conjunction and preposition use.

× Recently I choose. Uh. Making notes. Any special things to remember and repeating and repeating over and over? Uh, to memorize something important and crucial for my life?

✓ Recently, I choose to make notes of any special things to remember and repeat them over and over to memorize something important and crucial for my life.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain unnecessary pauses and question marks. The correction combines the ideas into a coherent sentence with proper verb forms and structure.