记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より明確で簡潔な表現を使い、文法を正しくすることが重要です。例えば、過去と現在の比較を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

範例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things, although I think my memory is not as sharp as when I was younger.

建議: 文法ミスが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。過去形の使い方や単語の選択に注意し、具体的な例を明確に述べることが必要です。

範例: I have never forgotten anything very important, but sometimes I forget small things, like my friend's birthday or promises I made to my wife.

建議: 文が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。主語と動詞の一致や語順に注意し、具体的にどのようにアプリを使うか説明すると良いでしょう。

範例: I sometimes use applications like Asana to help me remember important tasks, although I don't use them regularly.

建議: 回答が非常に不明瞭で意味がほとんど伝わりません。質問に直接答え、どのように重要なことを覚えているか具体的に説明する必要があります。

範例: I remember important things by making promises to my wife, which helps me stay committed and not forget them.

× Yes, I'm good at memorizing that's uh yeah compared to when I was young, of course my ability husband decrease that the Oval my normally is.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing, uh, yeah, compared to when I was young, of course my ability has decreased from what it normally was.

The sentence contains incorrect past tense usage and word order. 'husband decrease' is incorrect; it should be 'has decreased' to indicate a past action affecting the present. Also, 'the Oval my normally is' is unclear and likely a misordering of words. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and uses the correct past tense form 'has decreased'.

× I never forgotten. Something important.

✓ I have never forgotten anything important.

The phrase 'I never forgotten' is incorrect because 'forgotten' is a past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'Something important' is a fragment and should be combined with the previous sentence. The correction uses 'have never forgotten' to express the experience up to now.

× But of course sometimes I forgot some little things not quite important, for example, my friend's birthday or my wife fills promissor.

✓ But of course, sometimes I forget small things that are not very important, for example, my friend's birthday or my wife's promises.

'I forgot' should be 'I forget' to indicate habitual action in the present tense. 'some little things not quite important' is better expressed as 'small things that are not very important'. 'my wife fills promissor' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misspelling; corrected to 'my wife's promises'.

× I sometimes you use applications such as Asana or something like that.

✓ I sometimes use applications such as Asana or something like that.

The phrase 'I sometimes you use' is incorrect; 'you' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct sentence is 'I sometimes use'.

× It's some application help may to remember some important task.

✓ There are some applications that help me remember important tasks.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and word order. 'It's some application help may to remember' is ungrammatical. The correction uses 'There are some applications that help me remember important tasks' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× That's uh. In usual I don't use.

✓ That's uh, usually I don't use them.

'In usual' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'usually'. Also, the sentence is incomplete without an object; 'them' refers to the applications mentioned earlier.

× There's something but the the wild things.

✓ There are some things, but the important things...

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'There's something but the the wild things' does not make sense. The correction assumes the intended meaning is to refer to 'some things' and 'important things'.

× Important is found the important thing.

✓ The important thing is to find the important thing.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction attempts to make a meaningful sentence by rearranging words to 'The important thing is to find the important thing.'

× It's at some promises. Aye. Made with my wife.

✓ It's about some promises I made with my wife.

The original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'It's at some promises. Aye. Made with my wife.' is corrected to a single coherent sentence expressing the intended meaning.