记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议练习使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并避免重复和语法错误。

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget people's faces and phone numbers easily.

建議: 回答缺乏连贯性和完整性，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议练习用完整句子描述具体事件，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I once forgot my student ID number because I was very tired after studying for a long time at school.

建議: 回答中断断续续，表达不完整，词汇使用不准确。建议练习用完整句子列举具体事项，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as my friends' and family's birthdays, the time I need to go to work, and important appointments.

建議: 回答非常不连贯，难以理解。建议练习用简单明了的句子描述记忆方法，并使用具体例子说明。

範例: I usually use my phone's alarm or calendar to remember important things. Sometimes, my mother also helps me to remind me.

× No actually I often in one ear and out the other.

✓ No, actually I often let things go in one ear and out the other.

句子缺少动词，导致表达不完整。需要使用动词短语“let things go”来表达“听了就忘”的意思。

× It hard for me to remember the face and number.

✓ It is hard for me to remember faces and numbers.

“face”和“number”应使用复数形式，因为通常指多个面孔和号码。

× Yes. Once I have forgotten.

✓ Yes. Once I forgot.

描述过去发生的事情时，应使用一般过去时，而不是现在完成时。

× My student ID number. Dead death. Happens in. Tired night after I have all long time studying at the school.

✓ My student ID number. It happened on a tired night after I had been studying for a long time at school.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，时态使用不当。需要调整句子结构并使用过去完成时表达“我已经学习很长时间”。

× Well, there are lots of things I have remembered in my daily life.

✓ Well, there are lots of things I need to remember in my daily life.

“have remembered”表示已经记住，而题意应为“需要记住”，故应使用“need to remember”。

× I need to. Remember. My friends and family's birthday old.

✓ I need to remember my friends' and family's birthdays.

“birthday old”表达错误，应直接使用“birthdays”，且“friends”应为复数所有格“friends'”。

× The time to go to work. And. Aids.

✓ The time to go to work and appointments.

句子不完整，“Aids”用词不当，应改为“appointments”或“things to do”。

× We all I will. I usually use the form to remember important sees.

✓ Well, I usually use a form to remember important things.

句子结构混乱，词语使用错误，“sees”应为“things”。

× For example I I will. Give o'clock. In the phone up.

✓ For example, I will set an alarm on my phone.

表达不清晰，需使用正确的短语“set an alarm on my phone”。

× All. With the help of my mother to take the.

✓ All with the help of my mother to remind me.

句子不完整，缺少谓语，需补充完整表达。