机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use more natural and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, say 'I have many machines at home, such as a vacuum cleaner, dishwasher, and washing machine. My favourite is the dishwasher because I don't like washing dishes by hand. When I feel tired, I just load the dishwasher and it cleans the dishes for me.' This will make your answer clearer and more effective.

範例: I have many machines at home, such as a vacuum cleaner, dishwasher, and washing machine. My favourite is the dishwasher because I don't like washing dishes by hand. When I feel tired, I just load the dishwasher and it cleans the dishes for me.

建議: Focus on clarity and correct vocabulary. For example, use 'vacuum cleaner' instead of 'sweeping machine' and avoid confusing phrases. A better answer would be: 'Yes, washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important in our daily life. They help us save time and effort. When I feel tired, these machines make household chores easier and faster.'

範例: Yes, washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important in our daily life. They help us save time and effort. When I feel tired, these machines make household chores easier and faster.

建議: Try to make your sentences more fluent and natural. For example, say: 'Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine because I don't know how to operate it. For instance, when we first got the washing machine, I read the manual carefully to understand how to use it properly.'

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine because I don't know how to operate it. For instance, when we first got the washing machine, I read the manual carefully to understand how to use it properly.

建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity. For example, say: 'Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions first. If I don't understand how to use a machine, reading the manual helps me learn about different settings and use it without problems.'

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions first. If I don't understand how to use a machine, reading the manual helps me learn about different settings and use it without problems.

× There are many machines in my home like sweep sweeping machine, dishwashing or washing machine or floor making.

✓ There are many machines in my home like sweeping machines, dishwashing or washing machines, or floor mopping machines.

The sentence incorrectly uses singular forms where plural forms are needed to match 'many machines'. 'Sweep sweeping machine' and 'floor making' are incorrect; the correct terms are 'sweeping machines' and 'floor mopping machines'. This correction ensures subject and object agreement in number.

× But my favorite machine is dishwashing because I am not like to washing our dishes.

✓ But my favorite machine is the dishwasher because I do not like washing our dishes.

The phrase 'I am not like to washing' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I do not like washing'. Also, 'dishwashing' should be 'the dishwasher' to refer to the machine. This correction fixes verb usage and noun form.

× So uh, the dishwasher also help us.

✓ So, the dishwasher also helps us.

The verb 'help' needs to agree with the singular subject 'dishwasher', so it should be 'helps'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to pronoun and verb form.

× When I feel tired, I put up players on the dishwashing, they wash it.

✓ When I feel tired, I put the plates in the dishwasher, and it washes them.

The sentence has incorrect word choice and structure. 'Put up players' should be 'put the plates', 'dishwashing' should be 'dishwasher', and the sentence should be split for clarity. Also, 'they wash it' is incorrect; the dishwasher washes the plates.

× Yes, I think washing machines and sewing machines are very important in our life.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our life.

The student said 'sewing machines' instead of 'sweeping machines' which is likely a vocabulary error. Since the question is about washing and sweeping machines, the correction aligns with the intended meaning.

× So when I feel tired, I'm not I'm I have a no mood swings to washing machine to wash your clothes or sweeping machines.

✓ So when I feel tired, I do not feel like using the washing machine to wash clothes or the sweeping machine.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects verb forms and pronoun usage.

× But our washing machines and sweeping machines clean our house and washing machine play important.

✓ But our washing machines and sweeping machines clean our house, and washing machines play an important role.

The sentence incorrectly uses singular 'washing machine' after plural 'washing machines'. Also, 'play important' is incomplete; it should be 'play an important role'. This fixes number agreement and phrase completeness.

× Before using yes, before using the machine we can use the instructions because we don't know how to use the machine.

✓ Before using, yes, we should read the instructions because we don't know how to use the machine.

The modal verb 'can' is incorrectly used here; 'should' is more appropriate to express advice or recommendation.

× For example when the washing machine is coming in our in our house first time I don't know how to use it.

✓ For example, when the washing machine came to our house for the first time, I didn't know how to use it.

The sentence has tense and structure errors. 'Is coming' should be past tense 'came', and 'first time' needs 'for the first time'. Also, 'in our in our house' is repetitive and incorrect.

× So firstly I read the instructions of all the washing machine then I use it display.

✓ So firstly, I read the instructions of the washing machine, then I use its display.

The phrase 'instructions of all the washing machine' is incorrect; it should be 'instructions of the washing machine'. Also, 'use it display' should be 'use its display'. This fixes preposition and possessive pronoun usage.

× This can help easily to how to use a machine.

✓ This can help me easily learn how to use the machine.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction provides a proper sentence structure and clarity.

× Yes, it I think it is very important to read the instructions firstly.

✓ Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions first.

The phrase 'it I think' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'firstly' is better replaced with 'first' in this context.

× I don't know, I was not sure how to use it.

✓ I didn't know; I was not sure how to use it.

The sentence mixes present and past tense. 'I don't know' should be past tense 'I didn't know' to match 'was not sure'.

× If I care, read the menu to understand the different setting with made it easier to use the machine without any problems.

✓ If I carefully read the manual to understand the different settings, it makes it easier to use the machine without any problems.

The phrase 'If I care, read the menu' is incorrect. It should be 'If I carefully read the manual'. Also, 'setting with made' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'settings, it makes'. This fixes pronoun and verb usage.