机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，注意时态和单复数形式，同时使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner because I have a cat. Therefore, I need to clean my house regularly, and the vacuum cleaner helps a lot to keep it clean.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议使用更准确的时态和表达，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, of course. Both washing machines and sweeping machines save a lot of time when doing housework. Moreover, they make our lives much easier and are very efficient to use.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，注意时态和词汇使用，明确表达原因，并避免冗余。

範例: Yes, I often read the instructions because I am afraid of making mistakes during important steps. I also keep an electronic copy for reference.

建議: 句子结构重复且不够流畅。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用正确的语法结构。

範例: Yes, definitely. Reading the instructions before using machines helps us operate them correctly and safely.

× vacuum machine help a lot to keep clean

✓ vacuum machine helps a lot to keep clean

主语是单数名词“vacuum machine”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“helps”，否则主谓不一致。

× vacuum machine help a lot to keep clean

✓ vacuum machine helps a lot to keep clean

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，表示第三人称单数形式。

× those machines made our life much more easier

✓ those machines made our lives much easier

life应使用复数形式lives，因为指的是多个人的生活；more easier是错误的比较级用法，easier本身是比较级，不需要more修饰。

× those machines made our life much more easier

✓ those machines made our lives much easier

比较级easier前不应加more，直接使用easier即可。

× I will also made a copy of an electric version

✓ I will also make a copy of an electronic version

情态动词will后应接动词原形make，而不是过去式made。

× an electric version

✓ an electronic version

形容词electric表示“电的”，而electronic表示“电子的”，此处应使用electronic更准确。

× if I did some something wrong at the key procedures and to keep them

✓ if I do something wrong in the key procedures and keep them

时态应与条件句保持一致，使用现在时do；some something是重复，应去掉some；介词应为in而非at；to keep them结构不完整，应改为keep them。

× if I did some something wrong at the key procedures and to keep them

✓ if I do something wrong in the key procedures and keep them

条件句中应使用现在时态，且表达应简洁明确。

× more makes us using machines more correctly and safely

✓ makes us use machines more correctly and safely

动词make后应接动词原形use，而不是动名词using；more放在副词correctly前修饰正确。