机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để tránh lỗi nhỏ và làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, câu cuối nên sửa thành "It makes my home comfortable." để đúng ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một liên từ để kết nối các ý, giúp câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

範例: My favourite machine at home is definitely the air conditioner because the weather in Vietnam is very hot and humid. Therefore, the AC is not just a luxury but a necessity. Moreover, the feeling of walking into a cool room after being outside is unbeatable, which makes my home very comfortable.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Một số từ bị sai hoặc thiếu như "lifesaver" nên là "lifesavers", "cars" có thể là "chores", và câu cần được chia đúng thì. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và tránh câu quá dài hoặc rối. Hãy cố gắng nói rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are absolutely lifesavers. They help me with household chores that would otherwise be very time-consuming and tiring. In particular, the washing machine saves me a lot of time during the week. Therefore, I think they are among the most important inventions for modern home life.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, câu "But it complicated piece of equipment" nên là "But if it's a complicated piece of equipment". Ngoài ra, "give the instruction a week scheme" không rõ nghĩa, nên sửa thành "read the instructions carefully". Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: To be perfectly honest, it depends. If the machine is simple and intuitive, I usually try to figure it out myself. However, if it's a complicated piece of equipment like a new digital camera or a kitchen appliance with many settings, I definitely read the instructions carefully to make sure I don't miss anything.

建議: Bạn có ý kiến rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, "Reading the menu" nên là "Reading the manual". Ngoài ra, câu "prevent you from missing the machine" không rõ nghĩa, nên sửa thành "prevent you from misusing the machine". Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

範例: Absolutely, I think it's essential to read the instructions, especially for expensive or complex gadgets. Reading the manual not only helps you understand all the features but also prevents you from misusing the machine and accidentally breaking it. This simple step can save you a lot of time and potential trouble in the future.

× The feeling of walking into a cool room after being outside just unbeatable.

✓ The feeling of walking into a cool room after being outside is just unbeatable.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject 'The feeling' with the complement 'just unbeatable'. This is a sentence structure error involving the present participle phrase and the verb 'to be'. Adding 'is' corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically complete.

× It make my home a comfortable.

✓ It makes my home comfortable.

The subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number. Also, 'a comfortable' is incorrect because 'comfortable' is an adjective and does not need an article here. Removing 'a' corrects the adjective usage.

× 100% they are absolutely lifesaver.

✓ 100% they are absolutely lifesavers.

The noun 'lifesaver' should be plural 'lifesavers' to agree with the plural subject 'they'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× They all to me household cars that would otherwise be incredibly time consuming and tiring the washing machine and particularly free of so much time during the week.

✓ They are all to me household chores that would otherwise be incredibly time-consuming and tiring. The washing machine particularly frees up so much time during the week.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'cars' should be 'chores' (likely a typo), missing verb 'are' after 'They', and incorrect structure. Also, 'free of so much time' is incorrect; it should be 'frees up so much time'. The pronoun 'They' needs a verb to complete the sentence. The correction fixes these errors and clarifies meaning.

× I think they among the most important invasions for modern home life.

✓ I think they are among the most important inventions for modern home life.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' after 'they', and 'invasions' is a wrong word choice; it should be 'inventions'. This is a sentence structure and word choice error.

× But it complicated piece of equipment like a new digital camera or kitchen appliance with a lot of setting.

✓ But if it is a complicated piece of equipment like a new digital camera or kitchen appliance with a lot of settings,

The sentence is incomplete and missing auxiliary verbs 'if it is' to form a conditional clause. Also, 'setting' should be plural 'settings'. This is a sentence structure and singular/plural issue.

× I would definitely give the instruction a week scheme to make sure I don't miss.

✓ I would definitely give the instructions a quick skim to make sure I don't miss anything.

The phrase 'give the instruction a week scheme' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'give the instructions a quick skim'. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and word choice error.

× Reading the menu not only help you understand all differences, but also prevent you from missing the machine and accidentally breaking it.

✓ Reading the manual not only helps you understand all the differences, but also prevents you from misusing the machine and accidentally breaking it.

'Menu' is incorrect; it should be 'manual'. The verbs 'help' and 'prevent' need to be in third person singular form 'helps' and 'prevents' to agree with singular subject 'Reading the manual'. Also, 'missing the machine' is incorrect; it should be 'misusing the machine'. This involves incorrect use of quantifiers, subject-verb agreement, and word choice.