机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为自然，但表达略显简单且有些重复。建议避免使用“just”来弱化答案，增加更多具体细节，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the computer because it serves multiple purposes. For instance, I use it to watch videos, play games, and chat with my friends, which makes it an essential part of my daily life.

建議: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，且逻辑连接不够紧密。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致，使用连接词使观点更连贯。

範例: I believe washing and sweeping machines are useful at home; however, they are not absolutely necessary. When I was young, my family didn't have these machines, and my parents did all the laundry and cleaning manually, so people can live without them.

建議: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议简化表达，注意语法和时态，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I usually don't read the instructions before using machines because I don't like feeling restricted. However, this habit has caused me to break some machines, so I now realize that reading instructions is very important.

建議: 回答内容具体，但句子较长且有语法错误。建议分句表达，注意时态一致，使用连接词使表达更清晰。

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read instructions before using machines. For example, when I was in senior high school, I damaged my washing machine because I didn't read the instructions and selected the wrong settings. As a result, my parents had to buy a new one.

× That's because computers can do anything.

✓ That's because a computer can do anything.

这里的主语是单数的"a computer"，所以谓语动词和后续指代也应保持单数形式。原句中"computers"为复数，与前文不一致。

× my family don't have these machines

✓ my family doesn't have these machines

"family"作为一个整体名词，视为单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式"doesn't"，而不是复数形式"don't"。

× when I was young, my family don't have these machines

✓ when I was young, my family didn't have these machines

句子描述过去的情况，谓语动词应使用过去时态，"don't"应改为过去式"didn't"。

× I hated me that these two machines are quite useful at home

✓ I think that these two machines are quite useful at home

"I hated me"结构不正确，表达意思应为"我认为"，应使用"I think"。

× all these landries and washing works are just done by my parents

✓ all this laundry and washing work is just done by my parents

"laundry"和"washing work"是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式"is"，且拼写"landries"错误，应为"laundry"。

× I'm a person who don't want to be constructed to is restricted too much

✓ I'm a person who doesn't want to be restricted too much

"who"指代单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"doesn't"，且"constructed to is restricted"结构错误，应简化为"restricted"。

× I always broke some machines

✓ I always break some machines

"always"通常与一般现在时连用表示习惯动作，故应使用一般现在时"break"，而非过去时"broke"。

× that's very important to reading the these instructions

✓ that's very important to read these instructions

动词"important"后应接不定式"to read"，而非动名词"to reading"，且"the these"重复，应去掉"the"。

× I had to admit that I don't have the habit of reading the instructions when before using the machines

✓ I have to admit that I don't have the habit of reading the instructions before using the machines

句子描述现在的习惯，谓语应使用一般现在时"have"，且"when before"重复，应去掉"when"。

× put the wrong patterns at the time

✓ put the wrong pattern at the time

此处应使用单数"pattern"，表示错误的模式。

× I just broke my washing machine while I was in the Senior High School

✓ I broke my washing machine while I was in Senior High School

"just"在此句中多余且口语化，且"the Senior High School"中"the"不需要，学校名称前一般不加冠词。