机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, use more precise vocabulary like 'listen to music' instead of 'listen music'.

範例: My favourite machine at home is my laptop because it helps me work efficiently and also entertains me. For example, I watch movies and listen to music on it, and I often prepare presentations for my studies.

建議: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like 'sweating machine' instead of 'sweeping machine' and 'daily course'. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structures. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time. For instance, I can finish household chores quickly without much physical effort, which allows me to focus on other tasks.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and some awkward phrasing. Avoid repeating words like 'and and and' and try to organize your ideas more clearly. Use linking words to improve flow.

範例: No, I usually do not read the instructions before using machines. Instead, I rely on my own experience and observe how others use them to understand their functions.

建議: Your answer covers the main points but could be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words and complete sentences. For example, say 'how to use it' instead of 'how is it used'.

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because they provide essential information, such as how to use the machine properly, how to fix it if it breaks, and details about the warranty period.

× I use it to watch movies, listen music, do my presentation, make my presentation.

✓ I use it to watch movies, listen to music, do my presentation, make my presentation.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. So, it should be 'listen to music' instead of 'listen music'. This is a common preposition usage error.

× Yes, washing machine and sweating machine are of great importance.

✓ Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are of great importance.

The sentence refers to more than one machine, so the plural form 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' should be used. Also, 'sweating machine' is incorrect; it should be 'sweeping machine'.

× It helps to reduce my time.

✓ It helps reduce my time.

The verb 'help' is usually followed directly by the base verb without 'to' when expressing purpose. So, 'helps reduce' is correct rather than 'helps to reduce'.

× I can do my daily course using them.

✓ I can do my daily chores using them.

The word 'course' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'chores' meaning daily tasks. This is a vocabulary error related to word choice.

× It helps to reduce my time.

✓ They help to reduce my time.

Since 'washing machines and sweeping machines' are plural, the verb should agree in number. 'It helps' should be 'They help' to match the plural subject.

× I do not have to put in my extra effort for sweeping or washing clothes.

✓ I do not have to put in extra effort for sweeping or washing clothes.

The possessive pronoun 'my' is unnecessary here before 'extra effort'. The phrase 'put in extra effort' is standard without 'my'.

× Well, not really. I haven't read a single manual they provide with machines, not even of my phones or laptops, laptops or the kitchen appliances.

✓ Well, not really. I haven't read a single manual they provide with machines, not even for my phones, laptops, or kitchen appliances.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here; 'for' is the correct preposition to indicate the manuals belonging to or associated with the devices.

× I just use it according to my knowledge and and and by looking, observing how other people use it, not reading.

✓ I just use them according to my knowledge and by looking, observing how other people use them, not reading.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to multiple machines or devices, so 'them' should be used for correct pronoun agreement.

× Like how is it used, how it can be fixed, how guarantee, how much is the guarantee period of the equipment.

✓ Like how it is used, how it can be fixed, the guarantee, and how long the guarantee period of the equipment is.

The sentence structure is awkward and missing articles and verbs. 'How is it used' should be 'how it is used' for indirect question form. Also, 'how guarantee' is incomplete and should be 'the guarantee' or 'how the guarantee works'.

× So it is definitely necessary for us to watch it or read it.

✓ So it is definitely necessary for us to watch or read it.

The phrase 'watch it or read it' is awkward; usually, instructions are read, not watched. Possibly 'look at it or read it' would be better, but keeping original words, removing 'it' after 'watch' avoids redundancy.