机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant and provides reasons, but it contains grammatical errors and some incomplete sentences. Try to use correct verb forms and complete your thoughts clearly. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves a lot of time. Moreover, it has specific programmes for different fabrics, which makes it very convenient to use. This allows me to multitask while the clothes are being washed.

建議: Your answer shows understanding but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to organise your ideas logically. Try to be more specific about why these machines are important and how they help people.

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time for people with busy lives. Since many people have tight schedules nowadays, these machines help them keep their homes clean and manage chores more easily.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Use the correct tense and complete sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I always start by reading the instructions when I use new technology. This helps me understand how to use the machine properly and avoid mistakes. It also makes me feel more confident and comfortable.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use plural forms correctly and clarify your points. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and logical.

範例: Yes, I definitely think it is important to read the instructions. If we don't, we might make mistakes that could damage the machine or even cause danger. Therefore, reading instructions ensures we use the machine safely and efficiently.

× My favorite machine in my home is my washing machine because it save a lot of time and I can do lots of things simultaneously when I use it.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is my washing machine because it saves a lot of time and I can do lots of things simultaneously when I use it.

The verb 'save' should be in the third person singular form 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (the washing machine). In English, verbs in the present tense add an 's' for third person singular subjects.

× The other thing that I like to mention is that it has a specific program for different fabrics and it's really convenient for me to set programs and press the.

✓ The other thing that I like to mention is that it has specific programs for different fabrics and it's really convenient for me to set the programs and press the buttons.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear at the end. 'Program' should be plural 'programs' to match 'different fabrics'. Also, 'press the' is incomplete; it should specify what is pressed, such as 'press the buttons'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Since nowadays most people have a hectic lifestyle and they have a tightest schedule, they don't have much time so it's really comfortable for them to use them and modern era need to these items and gadgets to provide a comfortable and can be.

✓ Since nowadays most people have a hectic lifestyle and a tight schedule, they don't have much time, so it's really convenient for them to use these machines. The modern era needs these items and gadgets to provide comfort and convenience.

The adjective 'tightest' is a superlative and incorrect here; 'tight' is appropriate. 'Comfortable' is incorrectly used to describe convenience; 'convenient' fits better. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; restructuring improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I always started to use a new technology by reading instructions.

✓ Yes, I always start to use new technology by reading instructions.

The adverb 'always' suggests a habitual action, which requires the present simple tense 'start' rather than the past tense 'started'. Also, 'a new technology' is better as 'new technology' in general sense.

× Really comfortable for me to use it and I can learn a lot from them and I can get the correct information when I want to use this machine.

✓ It is really comfortable for me to use it, and I can learn a lot from the instructions, and I can get the correct information when I want to use this machine.

The sentence lacks a subject at the beginning. 'Them' is unclear; specifying 'the instructions' clarifies the pronoun reference. Adding 'It is' improves sentence structure.

× Yes, definitely. I believe that is really important to read instruction because if we don't read them, we make lots of errors and also it may harm this and danger for this machine.

✓ Yes, definitely. I believe that it is really important to read instructions because if we don't read them, we make lots of errors and it may also harm or be dangerous for the machine.

The sentence is missing the pronoun 'it' after 'believe that'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Harm this and danger for this machine' is incorrect; it should be 'harm or be dangerous for the machine' for clarity and correctness.

× So it's really important to read instruction to use efficient without this machine.

✓ So it's really important to read instructions to use this machine efficiently.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'To use efficient' is incorrect; the adverb 'efficiently' is needed to modify the verb 'use'. 'Without this machine' is incorrect in context; it should be 'to use this machine efficiently'.