机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法错误较多，如“help”应为“helps”，“at my own effort”表达不自然，应改为“by myself”。建议注意主谓一致和自然表达，同时避免重复和冗余。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me do laundry quickly and easily. I just put my dirty clothes inside and press a button, so I don't have to wash them by myself.

建議: 回答不够连贯，语法错误明显，如“help”应为“helps”，句子结构混乱。建议用更清晰的句子表达观点，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort. Since I prefer to relax, these machines help me finish housework more easily, which makes me happier.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“before I using”应为“before I use”，表达不完整且不自然。建议注意时态和句子完整性，表达更清晰。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using machines because modern devices often have complicated functions. For example, I need to learn how to connect them to the Internet properly.

建議: 回答中多处语法和用词错误，如“make you to operate”应为“help you operate”，“exploration”应为“explosion”，“raise instructions”表达错误。建议加强词汇准确性和语法练习。

範例: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important because they help you use machines correctly. If you don't read them, you might use the machine unsafely, which could even cause an explosion.

× It help me to do laundry more efficiently and conveniently.

✓ It helps me to do laundry more efficiently and conveniently.

主语是单数第三人称"It"，谓语动词应加-s，变为"helps"，以符合主谓一致规则。

× this kind of machine help me reduce my efforts as housework made me feel happy.

✓ this kind of machine helps me reduce my efforts as housework makes me feel happy.

"this kind of machine"是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"helps"和"makes"，以保持主谓一致。

× I already read instructions before I using such devices because I think modern machines are often equipped with complicated functions.

✓ I already read instructions before I use such devices because I think modern machines are often equipped with complicated functions.

"before"后面应接完整的主谓结构，"I using"不正确，应改为"I use"，保持时态一致。

× I don't need to do anything at my own effort.

✓ I don't need to do anything on my own effort.

固定搭配是"on one's own effort"，介词应使用"on"，表示依靠自己的努力。

× You need some instructors to know how to change to and how to connect it with the Internet, so.

✓ You need some instructions to know how to change it and how to connect it with the Internet.

"instructors"（指导者）用错，应为"instructions"（说明书）；"change to"不完整，应为"change it"，使句子完整通顺。

× So I think it's really important to raise instructions.

✓ So I think it's really important to read instructions.

"raise instructions"用词错误，应为"read instructions"，表示阅读说明书。