机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

範例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me wash and spin my clothes efficiently, saving me a lot of time and effort.

建議: Focus on clarity and avoid repetition. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'vacuum cleaner' instead of 'weaving machine') and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons why these machines are important.

範例: Definitely, washing machines and vacuum cleaners are essential at home because many people are busy with work and don't have enough time to do chores manually. These machines help complete household tasks quickly and efficiently.

建議: Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases. Use clear and complete sentences with appropriate linking words. Be specific about why reading instructions is important.

範例: Absolutely. I always read the instructions before using a machine to understand how to operate it safely and avoid any accidents.

建議: Try to avoid repeated words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why reading instructions is important.

範例: Absolutely. Reading instructions is crucial because it teaches users how to operate machines correctly and helps prevent accidents.

× Definitely, these machines are very important in a home because nowadays the individual are a workaholic, though they don't have enough time for washing their clothes as well as weaving machine.

✓ Definitely, these machines are very important in a home because nowadays individuals are workaholics, though they don't have enough time for washing their clothes as well as using a sweeping machine.

The word 'individual' is singular but is used with plural verbs and pronouns, causing a singular/plural mismatch. It should be plural 'individuals' to agree with 'are' and 'they'. Also, 'weaving machine' is likely a mistake for 'sweeping machine' and needs the article 'a' before it.

× So with the assistance of this machine, the individual can do their uh, the individual uh, the machine can do their household chores, which helps to make.

✓ So with the assistance of this machine, the individual can do their household chores, which helps to make things easier.

The sentence is incomplete and confusing. The phrase 'the individual uh, the machine can do their household chores' is incorrect and unclear. It should be simplified to 'the individual can do their household chores' and completed with a proper ending to clarify the meaning.

× Whenever I'm I'm using the machine, then I usually read the instruction as how to start and what what, what restriction that I have to use before any accident and etcetera.

✓ Whenever I'm using the machine, I usually read the instructions on how to start it and what restrictions I have to follow to avoid any accidents, etc.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. Also, 'what restriction that I have to use' is incorrect; it should be 'what restrictions I have to follow'. The phrase 'and etcetera' is redundant; 'etc.' alone suffices.

× Absolutely and the read the instruction is very crucial for the individual as the individual can can learn how to operate and how to avoid the avoid the accident by reading the restriction as that the individual can run a machine in a correct way.

✓ Absolutely, reading the instructions is very crucial for the individual as they can learn how to operate the machine and how to avoid accidents by following the instructions, so the individual can run the machine correctly.

'The read the instruction' is incorrect; it should be 'reading the instructions'. 'Instruction' should be plural. The phrase 'avoid the avoid the accident' is repetitive and incorrect; it should be 'avoid accidents'. Also, 'reading the restriction' is incorrect; it should be 'following the instructions'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.