机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cấu trúc cơ bản, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ như 'more easier' nên là 'easier'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

範例: My favourite machine at home is definitely the washing machine because it has made life much easier, especially for my mom, who is a housewife. She often uses it to save time and reduce fatigue, which helps her manage household chores more efficiently.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'saves' nên là 'save', 'import' có thể là lỗi đánh máy hoặc dùng từ không phù hợp. Câu trả lời cũng thiếu sự rõ ràng và logic, nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh gây nhầm lẫn.

範例: I believe washing machines are essential because they save a lot of time and effort. However, sweeping machines are not necessary for me since I only spend about 15 minutes a week cleaning, which I find sufficient, so I prefer to do it manually.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, rõ ràng và có ví dụ minh họa. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'read'.

範例: Definitely yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using any machine because it helps me understand how to operate it correctly. For instance, when I get a new kitchen appliance, I make sure to read the manual thoroughly to avoid mistakes and prevent accidents.

建議: Bạn trả lời tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'can helps' nên là 'can help'. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I think it's crucial to read the instructions carefully. By understanding how to use a device properly, we can avoid accidents and ensure it functions well for a long time. Moreover, this practice helps protect both ourselves and the equipment from damage.

× Well, I think washing machines are essential because they saves a lot of time and import.

✓ Well, I think washing machines are essential because they save a lot of time and effort.

The subject 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'save' instead of 'saves' to agree in number. Also, 'import' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'effort' to express the intended meaning.

× She often uses it for saving time and less tiring.

✓ She often uses it to save time and reduce tiredness.

The phrase 'for saving time' is better expressed as 'to save time' to indicate purpose. 'Less tiring' is an adjective phrase and does not fit here; it should be changed to 'reduce tiredness' to correctly express the idea.

× I always read the guidelines carefully before using machines since it helps me to understand how to operate it correctly.

✓ I always read the guidelines carefully before using machines since they help me to understand how to operate them correctly.

The pronouns 'it' and 'helps' are singular but refer to 'machines' and 'guidelines' which are plural. Therefore, 'they' and 'help' should be used to maintain agreement.

× Also, it can helps protect ourselves and the equipment from damage.

✓ Also, it can help protect ourselves and the equipment from damage.

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb 'help' should be used, not 'helps'. Additionally, 'ourselves' is a reflexive pronoun and should be used only when the subject and object are the same; here, 'us' is more appropriate.

× Also, it can helps protect ourselves and the equipment from damage.

✓ Also, it can help protect us and the equipment from damage.

The reflexive pronoun 'ourselves' is incorrectly used here; the correct object pronoun is 'us' because the subject is 'it' (the machine), not 'we'.