机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves a lot of time and effort. Since we have a big family, we do a lot of laundry every day. Moreover, it allows me to multitask while the clothes are being washed, which is very helpful.

建議: Your answer covers the main points but lacks clarity and has some awkward phrasing. Use more precise vocabulary and organize your ideas logically with linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I believe both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in daily life. Washing machines save time and effort compared to hand washing clothes. Similarly, sweeping machines clean large areas more efficiently and with less physical effort. Therefore, these machines help people focus on other important tasks or spend more time with their families.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating the same words. Use linking words to connect your points.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine to ensure I operate it correctly and safely. Additionally, understanding the functions and features helps me troubleshoot any problems or prevent damage.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Focus on using correct grammar and complete sentences. Also, explain your reasons clearly and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it helps prevent accidents and damage to the machine. Reading the manual also makes it easier to use the machine properly and understand its functions.

× My favorite mission in my home is washing machine as it saves a lot of time and effort since we have a big family so at the end of the day we have to do it more laundry so it saves me.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine as it saves a lot of time and effort since we have a big family, so at the end of the day we have to do more laundry, so it saves me time.

The word 'mission' is incorrect; it should be 'machine' (singular). Also, 'more laundry' is uncountable and does not need 'it' before it. Adding 'the' before 'washing machine' is necessary because it refers to a specific machine. These corrections fix singular/plural and article usage.

× My favorite mission in my home is washing machine as it saves a lot of time and effort since we have a big family so at the end of the day we have to do it more laundry so it saves me.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine as it saves a lot of time and effort since we have a big family, so at the end of the day we have to do more laundry, so it saves me time.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'washing machine' because it refers to a specific machine known to both speaker and listener.

× It's moreover allows me to multitask while doing laundry and they are essential for me to.

✓ It also allows me to multitask while doing laundry, and it is essential for me.

The pronoun 'It's' (it is) is incorrectly used with 'allows'; 'It also allows' is correct. 'They' is incorrect because the subject is singular 'washing machine'; it should be 'it'. The sentence is also incomplete and needs proper ending.

× Of course, both machines are important in our daily life. Washing machine saves a lot of time and effort compared to hand washing, clothes saving mission, more cleaning large areas, more efficient and less physically demand.

✓ Of course, both machines are important in our daily life. Washing machines save a lot of time and effort compared to hand washing; they save clothes, clean large areas more efficiently, and demand less physical effort.

'Washing machine' should be plural 'washing machines' to agree with 'both machines'. 'Clothes saving mission' is unclear and likely incorrect; corrected to 'they save clothes'. 'More cleaning large areas' is rephrased for clarity. 'Less physically demand' should be 'demand less physical effort'.

× Both mission allows people to focus on other important task or spend more time with the family.

✓ Both machines allow people to focus on other important tasks or spend more time with their family.

'Mission' should be 'machines' (plural). 'Allows' should be 'allow' to agree with plural subject. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks'. 'The family' is better as 'their family' for possessive pronoun.

× I read the instruction before using the machine because I want to ensure I use the machine correctly and safely and moreover I can understand the functions and features if and it also helps me if I am in troubleshooting or damage.

✓ I read the instructions before using the machine because I want to ensure I use the machine correctly and safely; moreover, I can understand the functions and features, and it also helps me if I encounter troubleshooting or damage.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as manuals usually have multiple instructions. The sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity. 'If and it also helps me if I am in troubleshooting or damage' is unclear; corrected to 'if I encounter troubleshooting or damage'.

× It helps me to help me.

✓ It helps me.

The phrase 'It helps me to help me' is redundant and incorrect. Simplifying to 'It helps me' is correct.

× Of course, I think it is important to read the instructions, so it award the accidents and also it award as well as award the damage of the machine.

✓ Of course, I think it is important to read the instructions, so it prevents accidents and also prevents damage to the machine.

'Award' is incorrect; the intended word is 'prevent'. The sentence also needs correction for clarity and proper verb usage.

× And it helps me to do work easily.

✓ And it helps me to do the work easily.

Adding 'the' before 'work' is necessary to specify the work being referred to.

× When I read the manual, I can understand the functions and.

✓ When I read the manual, I can understand the functions and features.

The sentence is incomplete; it ends abruptly after 'and'. Adding 'features' completes the thought.