机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然，表达不清晰，存在语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，明确表达机器的功能，并避免重复。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the sweeping robot because it helps clean the floor automatically, saving me time to focus on other important tasks.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，内容重复且不具体。建议使用完整句子，具体说明机器的重要性，并避免重复。

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they make daily chores easier and save us a lot of time and effort.

建議: 回答较为简洁，但时态使用不准确。建议使用正确时态，并稍作扩展说明阅读说明书的原因。

範例: Yes, whenever I get a new machine, I always read the instructions carefully to understand how to use it properly.

建議: 回答表达不够流畅，语法和用词有误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，明确说明阅读说明书的重要性。

範例: Yes, I think reading the instructions is important because it helps us learn how to use the machine correctly and avoid making mistakes.

× I like the sweeping robot. It can help us to do some day-to-day choices and let us release my hand and to do some to do the other important things.

✓ I like the sweeping robot. It can help us do some day-to-day chores and let us free our hands to do other important things.

这里'sweeping robot'是名词短语，后面用动词不定式'to do'不合适，应该用动词原形'do'。另外，'release my hand'表达不自然，应该用'free our hands'。'some to do the other important things'结构混乱，应改为'to do other important things'。建议用动词原形和更自然的表达。

× Yes, because it's conveniently and really help people to do something in the daily life.

✓ Yes, because it's convenient and really helps people do things in daily life.

'conveniently'是副词，但这里需要形容词来描述'it'，所以应改为'convenient'。'help'主语是第三人称单数，动词应加-s，变为'helps'。此外，'do something in the daily life'表达不自然，改为'do things in daily life'更合适。

× It can help us do some day-to-day choices and it's a good way for us to face the.

✓ It can help us do some day-to-day chores and it's a good way for us to face them.

'choices'用词不当，应该是'day-to-day chores'（日常家务）。句子末尾缺少宾语，'face the'不完整，应补充宾语'them'。

× Yes, if I received a new machine I will read the instructions.

✓ Yes, if I receive a new machine, I will read the instructions.

条件句中，表示将来可能发生的情况，主句用将来时，条件从句应使用一般现在时，不能用过去时'received'，应改为'receive'。

× Yes, well, we face the new machine. The instruction can help us to learn more about it and avoid the mistakes in the daily life.

✓ Yes, well, when we face a new machine, the instructions can help us learn more about it and avoid mistakes in daily life.

'we face the new machine'缺少时间状语，改为'when we face a new machine'更完整。'instruction'应为复数形式'instructions'，因为通常说明书是复数。'help us to learn'中'help'后面不需要'to'，直接用动词原形'learn'。'the mistakes'改为'mistakes'更自然。