机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽고 구체적인 예시를 포함하고 있지만, 문장 연결이 조금 더 명확하면 좋겠습니다. 예를 들어, 'because' 대신 'as'나 'since' 같은 다양한 연결어를 사용해 보세요.

範例: My favorite machine at home is my smartphone, as I always carry it with me. It is very convenient for accessing various types of information. For instance, I often use it to learn English vocabulary and watch educational videos on YouTube, which helps me improve my language skills.

建議: 답변이 주제에 맞고 구체적인 예시를 포함하지만, 문법 오류와 문장 마무리가 부족합니다. 문법을 정확히 하고 문장을 완성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important since they help me clean my room quickly and efficiently. For example, using a washing machine saves a lot of time compared to washing clothes by hand, and a sweeping machine makes it much easier to keep the floor tidy without much effort.

建議: 답변이 명확하고 논리적이며 구체적인 예시도 포함되어 있습니다. 다만, 다양한 연결어를 사용해 문장 흐름을 더 자연스럽게 만들면 좋겠습니다.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using a machine since it is essential to understand how to operate it safely. For example, if I don't know how to use it properly, I might damage the machine or even hurt myself. Therefore, reading the instructions helps me avoid any problems.

建議: 답변이 명확하고 구체적이지만, 'instruction' 대신 복수형 'instructions'를 사용하고, 문장 연결을 다양화하면 더 자연스러워집니다.

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions carefully because they provide important details about how to use the product safely and efficiently. For example, reading instructions can help me avoid making mistakes and save time when assembling or operating something new.

× using a washing machine save a lot of time compared to washing clothes by hand

✓ using a washing machine saves a lot of time compared to washing clothes by hand

The verb 'save' should be in the third person singular present tense 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'using a washing machine'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving the present tense form of the verb.

× a sweeping machine makes it much easier to keep the floor tidy without much

✓ a sweeping machine makes it much easier to keep the floor tidy without much effort

The phrase 'without much' is incomplete and unclear. It requires a quantifier or noun to specify what is lacking, such as 'effort'. This correction clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence.

× I think it is very important to read the instruction carefully

✓ I think it is very important to read the instructions carefully

The noun 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines or steps. Using the plural form is standard when talking about manuals or sets of directions.