机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が少し不自然で、文法的な誤りや意味の不明瞭さがあります。例えば、「ATV」は一般的に「All-Terrain Vehicle」を指し、テレビとは関係ありません。また、理由の説明が曖昧で、より具体的な内容を加えると良いでしょう。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the television because I enjoy watching anime, which helps me relax and feel entertained after a long day.

建議: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「both to machine」や「helps us to doing household」は不自然です。より正確な表現と具体的な理由を加えることが必要です。

範例: Yes, both washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they save time and make household chores much easier for many people.

建議: 文が長くて少し冗長です。また、「instruction」は単数形ではなく複数形の「instructions」が適切です。理由を明確にし、簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。

範例: I usually don't read the instructions because I am familiar with most machines, but sometimes I think it might be helpful to read them to avoid mistakes.

建議: 意味が不明瞭で、文法的にも誤りがあります。「resemble a machine」は不適切な表現です。理由を明確にし、正しい語彙を使うことが必要です。

範例: Yes, I think reading the instructions is important because it helps people understand how to use the machine properly and avoid damage or accidents.

× Yes, both to machine is so important because it helps us to doing household.

✓ Yes, both machines are so important because they help us with household chores.

The sentence has singular and plural issues. 'Both' refers to two items, so 'machine' should be plural 'machines'. Also, 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject. 'It helps us to doing household' is incorrect; it should be 'they help us with household chores' for correct verb agreement and natural phrasing.

× Yes, both to machine is so important because it helps us to doing household.

✓ Yes, both machines are so important because they help us with household chores.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used before 'machine'. The correct preposition is 'with' when referring to assistance in tasks, so 'help us with household chores' is appropriate.

× I usually don't read the instruction because I know almost the instructions, so I think I don't have to read it, but maybe I should read it.

✓ I usually don't read the instructions because I know most of them, so I think I don't have to read them, but maybe I should.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. Also, 'almost the instructions' is incorrect; 'most of them' is more natural. Pronouns should agree in number: 'read it' should be 'read them' referring to plural 'instructions'.

× I usually don't read the instruction because I know almost the instructions, so I think I don't have to read it, but maybe I should read it.

✓ I usually don't read the instructions because I know most of them, so I think I don't have to read them, but maybe I should.

The pronouns 'it' refer to 'instructions' which is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'them'. Using 'it' is incorrect here.

× Yes, of course it is very important for many people to read it, because it may. If people can't resemble a machine, instruction makes you comfortable.

✓ Yes, of course it is very important for many people to read the instructions because it helps. If people can't operate a machine, instructions make them comfortable.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'It may.' is incomplete. 'Resemble a machine' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'operate a machine'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. Also, pronouns should be consistent and appropriate.