机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不够自然，例如“tedious chop”应为“tedious chore”，“While it was working. It is working.”句子不完整且重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. Instead of washing clothes by hand, I can relax or do other tasks while it is running.

建議: 回答内容较好，但句子连接不够流畅，开头的“Because”不应单独成句。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节。

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are essential household appliances, especially for modern families. Since people often have heavy workloads and limited free time, these machines help improve daily efficiency and enhance quality of life.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“instruction”应为复数“instructions”，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议注意语法，使用完整句子，并具体说明阅读说明书的好处。

範例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using any machine, whether it is complex or simple. This helps me operate the machine correctly and avoid making mistakes.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“there are detailed information”应为“there is detailed information”，以及“prevent from mistakes”应为“prevent mistakes”。建议注意语法准确性，并简化表达。

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using machines because they provide detailed information that helps us use the machines properly. This can prevent mistakes, accidents, and frustration.

× While it was working.

✓ While it is working,

句子不完整，缺少主句，导致结构错误。应将其与后句合并，形成完整的复合句。

× Yes, washing machine and sweeping machines are essential household appliances in our daily life, especially in modern families.

✓ Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are essential household appliances in our daily life, especially in modern families.

主语中“washing machine”应使用复数形式以与“sweeping machines”保持一致，表示多种机器。

× I usually read the instruction before using a machine.

✓ I usually read the instructions before using a machine.

“instruction”应使用复数形式“instructions”，表示说明书的内容。

× No matter whether it is complex or easy.

✓ No matter whether it is complex or easy,

该句为不完整句，应与后文合并，且“it”指代不明确，应保持句子完整。

× Reading and instruction can help us operate the machine properly.

✓ Reading the instructions can help us operate the machine properly.

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，且应与“Reading”搭配形成固定表达“Reading the instructions”。

× Apart from that, it can prevent mistakes and helps.

✓ Apart from that, it can prevent mistakes and help.

“help”应与前面的“can”连用，保持动词不定式形式，且“helps”与主语不一致。

× because there are detailed information on it and can lead us to use the machines properly.

✓ because there is detailed information on them and they can lead us to use the machines properly.

“information”是不可数名词，应使用单数动词“is”；“it”指代不明确，应改为复数“them”指代“instructions”；后半句缺主语，应补充“they”。

× It can not only prevent from mistakes and accidents but also avoid from frustrations.

✓ It can not only prevent mistakes and accidents but also avoid frustrations.

动词“prevent”和“avoid”后不需要介词“from”，应直接接宾语。