机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to form a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. For example, mention why the rice cooker is your favorite and how it benefits you or your family.

範例: My favorite machine at home is the rice cooker because it makes cooking rice very convenient and hassle-free. For instance, I can set a timer, so the rice is ready when I need it, which is especially helpful when my wife is busy.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add specific supporting details. Explain how these machines save time and effort, and why that is important.

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and reduce physical effort. For example, washing machines clean clothes more effectively and quickly than hand washing, which helps people manage their household chores better.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use a clear topic sentence and link your ideas logically. Be specific about why reading instructions is important, such as safety and proper use.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I am not familiar with how to operate them. Moreover, reading the instructions helps me avoid accidents and ensures I use the machine correctly.

建議: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Provide a direct topic sentence, then explain specifically why reading instructions is important, such as preventing danger and ensuring proper care. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because they warn about potential dangers. Additionally, instructions guide users on how to handle the machine carefully to avoid damage or accidents.

× There are so much machines in my home, but I I think my favorite machine is rice cooker due to some various reasons.

✓ There are so many machines in my home, but I think my favorite machine is the rice cooker due to various reasons.

The quantifier 'much' is used with uncountable nouns, while 'many' is used with countable nouns like 'machines'. Also, 'some various reasons' is incorrect; 'various reasons' is sufficient. Additionally, 'the' is needed before 'rice cooker' as it refers to a specific item.

× There are so much machines in my home, but I I think my favorite machine is rice cooker due to some various reasons.

✓ There are so many machines in my home, but I think my favorite machine is the rice cooker due to various reasons.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'rice cooker' because it specifies a particular machine known to both speaker and listener.

× Eating because it is very much convenient to cook rice easily and set times, hassles and also hassle free especially when for especially when my wife is not.

✓ I like it because it is very convenient to cook rice easily and set the timer, making it hassle-free, especially when my wife is not available.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks a proper subject and verb structure. The correction provides a clear subject ('I like it'), verb, and clarifies the meaning with proper phrases like 'set the timer' and 'hassle-free'.

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machine are very much important.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important.

When referring to machines in general, the plural form 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' should be used. Also, 'very much important' is incorrect; 'very important' is the correct phrase.

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machine are very much important.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important.

The phrase 'very much important' is incorrect. The correct form is 'very important' without 'much'.

× Firstly, it says times and reduce the working load of a human being.

✓ Firstly, they save time and reduce the workload of a person.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'It says times' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'they save time'. Also, 'working load of a human being' is better expressed as 'workload of a person'.

× Not only that, but also it is very much convenient to to an effective to wash cloth and.

✓ Not only that, but it is also very convenient and effective for washing clothes.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains repeated words ('to to') and unclear phrases. The correction provides a complete and clear sentence with proper word order and vocabulary.

× Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I am not skilled at to run this type of machine for offer.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I am not skilled at operating this type of machine.

The phrase 'not skilled at to run' is incorrect; the correct form is 'not skilled at operating'. Also, 'for offer' is unclear and unnecessary.

× Not only that but also operating a machine it's not easier without knowing this, it can be dangerous.

✓ Not only that, but operating a machine is not easy without knowing how; it can be dangerous.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect verb forms. The correction clarifies the meaning with proper grammar and structure.

× That's why I did always read the instruction before using a machine.

✓ That's why I always read the instructions before using a machine.

The phrase 'did always read' is incorrect; the correct form is 'always read'. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' when referring to the manual.

× Yes, I believe it is important to read the instruction because there are so in the instruction.

✓ Yes, I believe it is important to read the instructions because there is a lot in the instructions.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. The phrase 'there are so in the instruction' is incomplete and unclear; 'there is a lot in the instructions' is clearer.

× It always, it has always been written that so much dangerous things can be happened without knowledge.

✓ It is always written that many dangerous things can happen without knowledge.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'So much dangerous things' should be 'many dangerous things'. 'Can be happened' is incorrect; the correct form is 'can happen'.

× And I think to offer it care, to offer it the machine carefully, it is very important to read the instruction.

✓ And I think to take care of the machine carefully, it is very important to read the instructions.

The phrase 'to offer it care, to offer it the machine carefully' is incorrect and unclear. The correction uses the proper phrase 'to take care of the machine carefully'. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'.