机器— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
考生
My favorite machine at home is the computer because I can use it to search for information, chat with others online, as well as listen to music. It can help me be more.
考官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
考生
Yeah, definitely. I think the washing machines and sweeping machines can help people do the housework and then they can save time to do other things such as. Pay attention to their work and take care of their children.
考官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
考生
Yes, of course I went with the machine if I don't read the instructions because I think the instructions can help me learn more about it and avoid let the machines be don't work. And yeah.
考官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
考生
Yeah, of course, I think it is very important to read the instructions. Without the instructions, maybe I will destroy the machine or I can't use it properly just to listen. So it's important.
評估
總分
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答时句子不完整，表达不够自然，且最后一句话不清楚。建议回答时保持句子完整，避免语法错误，并且内容要具体且连贯。
範例: My favorite machine at home is the computer because it allows me to search for information, chat with friends online, and listen to music. It helps me stay connected and entertained.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中断，句子不完整，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并且补充具体细节。
範例: Yes, definitely. Washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help people finish housework quickly, so they have more time to focus on their jobs and take care of their children.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免语法错误，并使用连接词使句子连贯。
範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they help me understand how to use it properly and avoid damaging it.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
分數: 60.0建議: 表达重复且不够准确，句子结构简单。建议避免重复，使用更准确的表达，并丰富细节。
範例: Yes, I believe reading the instructions is very important because without them, I might damage the machine or fail to use it correctly.
文法
× It can help me be more.
✓ It can help me do more.
句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词。应使用动词短语 'do more' 来表达意思。
× I think the washing machines and sweeping machines can help people do the housework and then they can save time to do other things such as.
✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines can help people do the housework and then they can save time to do other things such as...
在此句中，'the' 不应用于泛指复数名词，去掉定冠词更符合英语习惯。
× Pay attention to their work and take care of their children.
✓ They can pay attention to their work and take care of their children.
该句缺少主语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充主语 'They' 使句子完整。
× Yes, of course I went with the machine if I don't read the instructions because I think the instructions can help me learn more about it and avoid let the machines be don't work.
✓ Yes, of course I won't use the machine if I don't read the instructions because I think the instructions can help me learn more about it and avoid the machine from not working.
句子时态和结构混乱，'went with the machine' 不合适，应改为 'won't use the machine'；'avoid let the machines be don't work' 语法错误，应改为 'avoid the machine from not working'。
× And yeah.
✓ And yes.
口语中 'yeah' 可用，但书面语或正式语境中应使用 'yes'。
× Without the instructions, maybe I will destroy the machine or I can't use it properly just to listen.
✓ Without the instructions, maybe I will destroy the machine or I can't use it properly just by listening.
短语 'just to listen' 结构不正确，应改为 'just by listening' 来表达通过听来使用。
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