机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating phrases like "I am a I'm a" and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid redundancy such as "in the morning and sometimes in the evening too" which could be simplified.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the coffee machine because I love coffee. It helps me make a good cup quickly, especially in the morning. I also enjoy using it myself since it saves me from going out to buy coffee.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "people doesn't have to feel burden for doing house course" should be corrected. Use linking words like "for example" or "because" to improve coherence. Also, try to be more specific about how these machines help.

範例: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort. For example, I recently bought a washing machine, which has made doing laundry much easier and quicker for me.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Avoid awkward phrases like "prevent from any bad experiences" and "according to the company." Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the benefits of reading instructions.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine because it helps me avoid mistakes and use the appliance correctly, which can prevent damage.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. For example, instead of "if you use according to the instruction given by the company," say "if you follow the manufacturer's instructions." Also, try to avoid repeating similar ideas from previous answers.

範例: Yes, reading instructions is important because it helps you use machines safely and correctly. Moreover, following the manufacturer's guidelines can help maintain the warranty.

× Definitely it's important as it saves time and energy and people doesn't have to feel burden for doing house course.

✓ Definitely it's important as it saves time and energy and people don't have to feel burdened by doing house chores.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't' to agree in number. Also, 'burden' should be 'burdened' to correctly function as an adjective, and 'house course' is incorrect; the correct term is 'house chores'.

× Definitely it's important as it saves time and energy and people doesn't have to feel burden for doing house course.

✓ Definitely it's important as it saves time and energy and people don't have to feel burdened by doing house chores.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to use with 'burdened' in this context is 'by'. Also, 'house course' is a misused phrase; the correct term is 'house chores'.

× I would say coffee machine.

✓ I would say the coffee machine.

The noun 'coffee machine' is a specific object, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it to specify which machine is being referred to.