机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more structured and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be specific about how you use the laptop.

範例: My favourite machine at home is my laptop because I use it for various tasks. For instance, I complete all my assignments on it, and I also enjoy watching movies and shopping online. It is an essential device that helps me stay productive and entertained.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by adding more specific reasons and using linking words to enhance coherence. Also, try to avoid repeating words and expand your vocabulary slightly.

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. Because of our hectic schedules, these machines save a lot of time and effort. For example, without a washing machine, doing laundry manually would be very tiring and time-consuming.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and making the sentence more natural. Use linking words to explain your reason clearly and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine because if we don't follow them properly, it can cause permanent damage. Therefore, reading the handbook helps me use the equipment safely and correctly.

建議: Your answer is on point but needs better sentence structure and grammar. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about the consequences of not reading instructions.

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions. Otherwise, machines like kitchen appliances may malfunction or stop working properly. Reading instructions ensures that we use devices safely and efficiently.

× All my all my assignments I used to do with this and other than this all day shopping and from watching movies, everything I used to.

✓ All my assignments I used to do with this, and other than this, all day shopping and watching movies, everything I used to do.

The sentence has redundancy with 'All my all my' and incorrect plural usage. Also, the phrase 'everything I used to' is incomplete and needs 'do' at the end. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Washing machine and sweeping machines are very essential in today's life.

✓ Washing machines and sweeping machines are very essential in today's life.

The phrase 'Washing machine and sweeping machines' mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly. Both should be plural to refer to the general category of machines.

× it may cause permanent damage if we didn't follow all the instruction given on their handbook.

✓ it may cause permanent damage if we don't follow all the instructions given in their handbook.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'didn't follow' after 'may cause' which requires present or future tense. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and 'on their handbook' should be 'in their handbook' for correct preposition usage.

× if we didn't follow all the instruction given on their handbook.

✓ if we don't follow all the instructions given in their handbook.

The noun 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. Also, the preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'in' is appropriate for documents like handbooks.

× if we didn't follow all the instruction given on their handbook.

✓ if we don't follow all the instructions given in their handbook.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'handbook'. The correct preposition is 'in' because instructions are contained within the handbook.

× it is important to read the instruction otherwise some machines like the kitchen appliance may stop working properly or so the reading instruction help use device safely and efficiently.

✓ it is important to read the instructions; otherwise, some machines like kitchen appliances may stop working properly, so reading instructions helps us use devices safely and efficiently.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'; 'kitchen appliance' should be plural 'kitchen appliances'; 'reading instruction' should be 'reading instructions'; 'help use device' should be 'helps us use devices'. Also, punctuation is added for clarity.