机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，表达不清楚。建议回答时先直接说出你最喜欢的机器是什么，然后简要说明原因，避免重复和不完整的句子。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort when doing laundry.

建議: 回答内容基本符合要求，但表达不够自然，语法和用词有误。建议使用更准确的表达，如“help people do housework”改为“help people with housework”，并注意句子流畅。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they help people with housework and save a lot of time and effort.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议改为更自然的表达，如“it helps me use the machine correctly”，并注意句子结构完整。

範例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because they help me use it correctly and safely.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议先明确说明阅读说明书的重要性，然后举例说明，比如解决使用中的问题。

範例: Yes, I think reading the instructions is very important because they can help me solve problems when I don't know how to use the machine.

× In my house, my favorite machine is. Because what machine can help me? The depth and it's very convenient.

✓ In my house, my favorite machine is the dishwasher because it can help me and it's very convenient.

原句结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致句子不通顺。应将句子合并，明确表达喜欢的机器及其原因。建议将句子合并为一个完整句子，避免断句错误。

× Because what machine can help me?

✓ Because it can help me.

句中使用了疑问词'what'，但句意应为陈述句，表达机器能帮助我。应使用代词'it'指代前文提到的机器。

× The depth and it's very convenient.

✓ The dishwasher is very convenient.

原句中'the depth'可能是拼写错误，应为'dishwasher'。且句子结构不完整，应补充谓语动词。

× Yes, I think they are important because in daily life they can help people do some housework and it is relax people hands.

✓ Yes, I think they are important because in daily life they can help people do some housework and relax their hands.

原句中'it is relax people hands'结构错误，'relax'应为动词，且主语应为复数代词'they'对应的'people's hands'，应改为'relax their hands'。

× Yes, I do. I often read the instructions before using a machine because it can direct my user machines.

✓ Yes, I do. I often read the instructions before using a machine because they can guide me to use the machines.

原句中'it can direct my user machines'表达不清，'instructions'为复数，应使用复数代词'they'，且'direct my user machines'表达错误，应改为'guide me to use the machines'。

× Yes, I think it is very important because when we have a problem of what we do not, the instructions can help me to work out.

✓ Yes, I think it is very important because when we have a problem that we do not understand, the instructions can help me to work it out.

原句中'when we have a problem of what we do not'结构不完整且不通顺，应补充完整的定语从句，改为'when we have a problem that we do not understand'。且'work out'前应加宾语'it'。