机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用正确的时态和表达方式。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. I just put all my clothes into it and wait until the cycle finishes, which is very convenient.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议减少口头语，使用连贯的句子，并且用具体例子支持观点。

範例: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are very important because they help busy people save time. This way, they can focus on more important tasks in their daily schedule.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的语法，避免重复，并且结构更紧凑。

範例: I rarely read the instructions because the buttons and labels are usually clear. Also, it's easy to find information on social media if I need help.

建議: 回答较好，但有语法错误和表达不完整。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性，使用更自然的表达。

範例: It depends. For complicated machines, it's important to read the instructions carefully. For example, when I use my new camera, I read the manual to understand the function of each button.

× it must be the washing machine because it released my hands.

✓ it must be the washing machine because it has released my hands.

这里需要使用现在完成时态，表示洗衣机从过去到现在一直在帮我解放双手。过去分词形式需要与助动词“has”连用。

× I don't bother to, I don't need to bother to wash my clothes, all kinds, all kinds of items, but just through it threw them away into the washing machine and wait for it's competition complication.

✓ I don't bother to wash my clothes, all kinds of items; I just throw them into the washing machine and wait for its completion.

“through”应为“throw”，表示扔进洗衣机；“threw”是过去式，不符合句意；“it's competition complication”应为“its completion”，表示完成。句子结构混乱，需简化并正确使用介词。

× wait for it's competition complication.

✓ wait for its completion.

“it's”是“it is”的缩写，表示“它是”，此处应使用物主代词“its”，表示“它的”。

× people in the are busy in their daily life, so they need to, so they need all kinds of washing machines or sweeping machine to save their time

✓ people are busy in their daily lives, so they need all kinds of washing machines or sweeping machines to save their time

“people”是复数，后面应使用复数动词“are”；“daily life”应为复数“daily lives”；“sweeping machine”应为复数“sweeping machines”，与“all kinds of”搭配。

× people in the are busy in their daily life

✓ people are busy in their daily lives

“in the”多余且错误，应直接使用“are busy in their daily lives”。

× I seldom read the instructions because all the buttons and the words in the machine is quite clear, and I don't need to read the instruction very careful.

✓ I seldom read the instructions because all the buttons and the words in the machine are quite clear, and I don't need to read the instructions very carefully.

“buttons and words”是复数，动词应为“are”；“instruction”应为复数“instructions”；“careful”应为副词“carefully”，修饰动词“read”。

× I don't need to read the instruction very careful.

✓ I don't need to read the instructions very carefully.

“careful”是形容词，修饰名词；此处应使用副词“carefully”修饰动词“read”。

× And also additionally additionally it's quite convenient to search information from the social media, so we can always get to some get some.

✓ Also, it's quite convenient to search for information on social media, so we can always get some.

“And also additionally additionally”重复且冗余，应简化为“Also”；“search information from”应为“search for information on”；“get to some get some”重复，应简化为“get some”。

× search information from the social media

✓ search for information on social media

动词“search”后应接介词“for”，表示“搜索”；“social media”前不加冠词，使用介词“on”。

× For example, when I use my new camera, I need to read the manuals carefully to get to know how to what's the exact function of each button.

✓ For example, when I use my new camera, I need to read the manuals carefully to get to know the exact function of each button.

“how to what's”结构错误，应删除“how to”，直接使用“the exact function”。