机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm không chính xác và từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'lazy patient' và 'watching dances' không đúng ngữ cảnh). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy tập trung vào việc mô tả máy móc yêu thích và lý do bạn thích nó một cách cụ thể hơn.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort when doing laundry. I find it very convenient since it handles all the washing automatically, allowing me to focus on other tasks.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác ('sweating machines' thay vì 'sweeping machines'). Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và giải thích rõ lý do tại sao các máy này quan trọng.

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help us save time and effort in household chores. Without them, we would have to spend much more time cleaning and washing manually.

建議: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời còn lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và thêm một vài chi tiết để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine because it helps me understand how to operate it properly and avoid any mistakes.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý đúng nhưng bị lặp từ và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và giải thích rõ hơn về tầm quan trọng của việc đọc hướng dẫn.

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using any machine to ensure safety and to use the device correctly.

× the best favorite machine I like in my home is, uh, washing machines because it help me washing dishes that I had it.

✓ the best favorite machine I like in my home is, uh, the washing machine because it helps me wash dishes.

The subject 'washing machines' is plural but the verb 'help' is singular 'it help', causing a subject-verb agreement error. Also, 'washing dishes that I had it' is incorrect; it should be 'wash dishes'. The sentence should use singular 'washing machine' to match 'is' and 'helps'.

× because it help me washing dishes that I had it.

✓ because it helps me wash dishes.

After the verb 'help', the base form of the verb 'wash' should be used, not the '-ing' form 'washing'. Also, 'that I had it' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× I hate watching dances so.

✓ I hate washing dishes, so.

The student likely meant 'washing dishes' but said 'watching dances'. Also, 'dances' is plural but the context is about dishes. The phrase should be corrected to 'washing dishes'.

× I think washing machine and sweating machines are important for people because they have people to help us and and have have some people take the time to do to do.

✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important for people because they help us and save us time.

The phrase 'washing machine and sweating machines' mixes singular and plural incorrectly; both should be plural 'washing machines and sweeping machines'. Also, 'sweating machines' is likely a mispronunciation of 'sweeping machines'. The sentence structure is unclear and redundant; it should be simplified.

× I always read the instruct the instruction before using a new machine because when I buy a new machine I I don't know how to use that.

✓ I always read the instructions before using a new machine because when I buy a new machine, I don't know how to use it.

The phrase 'read the instruct the instruction' is incorrect; it should be 'read the instructions'. Also, 'use that' should be 'use it' to correctly refer to the machine.

× I always read the instruct the instruction before using a new machine because when I buy a new machine I I don't know how to use that.

✓ I always read the instructions before using a new machine because when I buy a new machine, I don't know how to use it.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines.

× So I need to read the instruction that's that's help me how to use them that's all.

✓ So I need to read the instructions that help me learn how to use it, that's all.

'That's that's help me' is incorrect; it should be 'that help me'. Also, 'how to use them' is inconsistent with singular 'a new machine'; it should be 'how to use it'.

× I think everyone needs to read the instructions before before using them because you, everyone can everyone have to make sure that they are using that.

✓ I think everyone needs to read the instructions before using them because everyone has to make sure that they are using them correctly.

The sentence has redundant and unclear pronoun use. 'You, everyone can everyone have to' is incorrect. It should be simplified to 'everyone has to'. Also, 'using that' should be 'using them' to refer to instructions or machines.