机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但表达略显口语化且有些重复，建议使用更正式且连贯的表达方式，避免重复和口语缩写。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the oven because I enjoy baking. It feels magical to combine ingredients and have them transform into delicious cakes or cookies.

建議: 回答内容明确，但句子结构较简单且有语法错误，建议使用更准确的语法和连接词，使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time and effort. Thanks to these machines, household chores become much easier and more efficient.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够正式，建议避免口语化表达，使用更准确的句式和词汇。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I am not very familiar with technology. This helps me avoid using it incorrectly or causing any damage.

建議: 回答缺乏连贯性且重复，建议使用更正式和连贯的语言，避免重复和口语化表达。

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because they provide guidance on how to use new machines properly and safely.

× Doing those chores often take up many times.

✓ Doing those chores often takes up a lot of time.

动名词短语作为主语时，谓语动词应使用单数形式；'take up many times'表达不准确，应该用'a lot of time'表示花费大量时间。

× You can just use it whatever you like.

✓ You can just use it however you like.

此处应使用副词'however'表示“无论怎样”，而不是'whatever'。

× I'm not really good at using those technology or machines, so I would read instructions before using them so that I won't use it in the wrong way or make it like broken or something.

✓ I'm not really good at using that technology or those machines, so I would read the instructions before using them so that I won't use them in the wrong way or break them.

'technology'是不可数名词，前面不加复数形式；'instructions'前应加定冠词'the'；代词使用应保持一致，避免混用单数和复数。

× You can just use it whatever you like.

✓ You can just use it however you like.

此处应使用副词'however'，表示“无论怎样”，而不是'whatever'。