机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して直接的に答え、具体的な説明を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、好きな機械の名前を明確にし、その理由を簡単に説明すると良いです。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the digital thermometer. It became very useful after the COVID-19 pandemic started because it helps us check our temperature quickly and safely.

建議: 内容が少し混乱しており、文法や語彙の誤りがあります。洗濯機と掃除機の重要性について、具体的な理由を明確に述べ、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。接続詞を使って論理的に話すことも意識してください。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important. They save us a lot of time and effort because we can clean clothes and floors quickly and easily.

建議: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、繰り返しや不自然な表現があります。簡潔で自然な英語を使い、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I want to use it correctly and safely as the manufacturer recommends.

建議: 文法の誤りや繰り返しがあり、少し不自然です。理由を明確にし、簡潔で正しい文法を使う練習をしましょう。接続詞を使って論理的に話すことも大切です。

範例: Yes, it is very important to read the instructions because if we don't, accidents may happen and we might not use the machine safely.

× In my in my home, the machine which which to know the person's temperature is can be seen in in many places after the COVID-19 was spread dead.

✓ In my home, the machine which is used to measure a person's temperature can be seen in many places after COVID-19 spread.

The original sentence has redundant prepositions and incorrect phrasing such as 'to know the person's temperature' and 'was spread dead'. The phrase 'used to measure a person's temperature' is more appropriate. Also, 'after COVID-19 spread' is the correct expression. Remove repeated words and unnecessary prepositions for clarity.

× Yes, absolutely, because by using washing machine we don't need to, we can avoid to hurt or like enjoy our hands.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because by using a washing machine we don't need to hurt or strain our hands.

The original sentence misuses quantifiers and includes awkward phrasing like 'avoid to hurt' and 'like enjoy our hands'. The correct expression is 'we don't need to hurt or strain our hands'. Also, 'a washing machine' is needed to specify the noun properly.

× And by using washing machine we can wash many dishes at one time, so.

✓ And by using a washing machine, we can wash many dishes at one time.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'washing machine'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'so' which is unnecessary. Removing 'so' and adding the article improves clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I always read the instruction before using the machine because I really I want to use the machine by following the instruction that the company said so and so I'm always with the instruction and you.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using the machine because I really want to use the machine by following the instructions provided by the company, so I always have the instructions with me.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' when referring to guidelines. The phrase 'that the company said so and so' is unclear and should be replaced with 'provided by the company'. Also, 'I'm always with the instruction and you' is unclear and corrected to 'I always have the instructions with me'.

× Yes, absolutely. Because if we don't raise the instructions before using the machine, it's have a a possibility to make the accident or or like we couldn't use it, we can't use it safely.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Because if we don't read the instructions before using the machine, there is a possibility of an accident or that we won't be able to use it safely.

The verb 'raise' is incorrect here; it should be 'read'. Also, 'it's have a a possibility' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'there is a possibility'. The phrase 'or like we couldn't use it' is awkward and corrected to 'or that we won't be able to use it safely'.

× So it is important to read instructions.

✓ So it is important to read the instructions.

When referring to specific instructions, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'instructions' to specify which instructions are meant.