机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy such as 'I would like to usually start my day' which can be simplified.

範例: My favourite machine at home is my coffee machine because it allows me to make various types of coffee with the perfect blend of milk, cream, sugar, and espresso. I usually start my day with a strong cup, which helps me feel energized.

建議: Your answer addresses the question well and includes reasons, but it can be improved by using more precise linking words and avoiding repetition of phrases like 'I think'. Also, try to combine sentences for better flow and use more specific vocabulary.

範例: Yes, both washing and sweeping machines are important, especially given our busy schedules. For instance, washing machines help us clean clothes regularly, while sweeping machines make cleaning effortless and efficient.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to explain your reasons. Avoid redundancy and improve vocabulary for clarity.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine because it helps me operate it easily. Especially when I'm new to a device, the user manual guides me and makes the process much simpler.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by varying sentence structure and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating the same phrase 'user manual' twice in one sentence.

範例: Yes, I believe reading the instructions before using any machine is important because it helps us operate the device effortlessly and understand necessary precautions to ensure safety.

× I would like to usually start my day with a strong cup of coffee, so yes.

✓ I would usually like to start my day with a strong cup of coffee, so yes.

The adverb 'usually' should be placed before the main verb 'like' to correctly modify it. Placing 'usually' after 'would like to' is awkward and incorrect in English sentence structure.

× I think having washing machine is very beneficial as we can wash our clothes from time to time and having sweeping machine also has its own perks like we can sweep effortlessly.

✓ I think having a washing machine is very beneficial as we can wash our clothes from time to time and having a sweeping machine also has its own perks like we can sweep effortlessly.

The nouns 'washing machine' and 'sweeping machine' are countable and singular, so they require the indefinite article 'a' before them. Omitting the article leads to incorrect grammar.

× if we read instructions we get use the machine at ease.

✓ if we read instructions we get used to the machine at ease.

The phrase 'get use' is incorrect; the correct form is 'get used to' followed by the noun or gerund. 'Used to' here functions as an adjective meaning accustomed to something.

× It makes our work a lot more easier if we are particularly new to using a machine without the user manual, I think it's hard for everyone.

✓ It makes our work a lot easier if we are particularly new to using a machine without the user manual; I think it's hard for everyone.

The word 'easier' is already a comparative adjective, so adding 'more' before it is redundant and incorrect. Also, the sentence is a run-on and should be separated properly for clarity.